Reviews for Severus Snape, the greasyhaired teenager
MBJC chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Great truly exellent, just one bit of critisism, i would leave the "He was uncool;" part out use a more complicated or authentic word, but you should really write a book or something i loved it!
alwaysimagined chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Fantastic! You really managed to capture how the teenage Snape.