Reviews for The Crack in the Smiling Mask
claraowl chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
I adored this.
Collaborative Lady chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
... I'm sorry, did Ren just close himself into a locker? Like it was a room? Casually? SNORT represed chuckle chuckle BWAHAHAHAHAHAH. Chapter gets progressively better towards the end.
BrizzyBabber chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
lol but i recon you should give this story more chapters i can imagine this story being absolutly amazing!

even more than it is already!
A Midsummer Night's Dreams chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Pfft!Bwhahahahaha!She just confessed she would want to marry you, Kuon! XD
A Midsummer Night's Dream chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
It's Corn!Way to go, Tsuruga.
Lady Knight Keladry chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Aww, it seems typical that she thought she'd marry Corn. It's an interesting development though I wonder how it would be pulled off.
my name is paper YAH chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
wow. he realizes that she loved him...well Corn. cute
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
yay! for a feeling Ren. smiles all around! thanks for the read.
Devilishduck chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Ohh! I LOVE the plot!

I really like your writing. It'sdescriptive enough that I can see the room and people and expressions, but it's not overdoing it, just PERFECT :D
Railway Station chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Lovely. Ren is so sweet. Moko amuses. Teehee~
Rya Kinotsu chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Heh. It's good, but the line, "It was a face as hideous to her as the room they were in" Left me kind of confused.
Catchick chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
COOL! how in the hell is ren fitting in these lockers?
reko1620 chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Haha...such a funny and sweet oneshot. I think this can be continue but it's your story so I can't do anything, but excellent job on the writing and plot_ Ren was just so easy to tease and to figure out(: Again good job on the writing and hope to read more from you in the future
blacktohru chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
My favourite line: “Love Me hotline. Kanae Kotonami speaking. How can I make you – ugh - love me?” XDXD

Very nicely done! I love the idea of Kyoko making a doll of her Fairy Prince Corn.
anitaapril28 chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
okay the heart thats just bad... but i can totaly see the presedent doing that
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