|Reviews for Prospecting|
| en1gma chapter 1 . 3/11
I cannot stress this enough when I say that I really LOVE your stories. This series is my favorite as it combines two things I love, Naruto & New York City. It's a shame that I discovered this so late & it seems like you're no longer writing for . You are an amazing writer and by far one of my favorites. Wherever you are I hope you are still writing & sharing your voice as an author to the world of literature.
| Crazycally chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Very in character I aprove, I like how all your storys always have an age apropate tone (this one had a exprenced slowness while the younger generations move really fast)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
you could write a sequel with the next generation...
| the blanket chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
I like your world so much more than Kishimoto's. And it doesn't hurt that I could picture the places you referred to in my mind's eye, as I read.
Loved the entire series. :)
| encyser chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
It's quite dry. Not overly dramatic, yet not at all dull. It's like one of those scenes you read from a Danielle Steel or Judith Krantz novel. If it were longer maybe it could be a novel. It sure has the potential to be a bestseller. Or a TV special.
| InosBane chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Aw...this was really really great!
| seafoam-pulse chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Have I told you how much I love your New York series? It's gorgeous.
| Melinda Coulson chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
That was GREAT! I loved it so much! Please you have to write more! Or maybe you can write another chapter! I loved that! All the details I could see it all! :)
| Philyra chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Oh, I love Jiraiya/Tsunade, and you did this so very well! I always love their banter, and you managed to capture them perfectly in this different setting, as you have with all of the couple in the series. Great job!
| White Butterfly chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
This is indeed very sweet and nice mature, bringing a graceful 'close' to this series. I do hope there will additional stories that you add at your discretion though, as all these stories were very sweet and fun to read.
| sophia666 chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Great writing. I loved it, I thought they were both in character and I loved the Jiraiya/Tsunade. It's sad that the New York series is over. It's been good.
| greensapphire chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
wow this was well written I loved it I love the whole idea of the new york society, omg i loved jiraiya in this he was so cocky and gentlemen like at the same time yay! foe tsunade and jiraiya all i have to say is finally great job i loved it
| solfire chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Aw. Tha was adorable!
I love this series! You should seriously do an ensemble piece with all of them :D
| aznjtgirl chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
and rather naughty there at the end lol.
im likin it
keep up the goodwork. its been excellent so far.
| Hououza chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Magnificent story, beautifully done.
I love how the two of them play off one another, the feel of them together and that they have been that way for a long time.
Good luck & best wishes,