Reviews for The Other Cullen
LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
cliff hanger much?


who the eff are scott and sophia's parents?

ay caray!

cliffies KILL me!

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 14 . 8/19/2008
Expecting the unexpected certainly does make the unexpected expected! What else would it do? lol.

oh my god... you absolutely kill me with the pre-views!

Oh my gosh... SEVENTEEN FOREVER byt METRO STATION just came on on my Ipod... yikes!

If you haven't heard the song - go listen to it! everytime I listen to it, I think of Twilight. Edward usually. But that\s because he's immortal - seventeen forever.

Whoa... freakish!

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 13 . 8/19/2008
Awesome chapter.

I still don't like the fact that Sayla is a Crowley... grrish.

But I guess I'll deal.

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 12 . 8/19/2008
wow.. you really like the bill cosby quotes, eh? niice.

like they didn't know she was his girl friend. ha!

there are no secrets in the Cullen household.


WHOOT HOOT! baseball! Cullen style? With Hayden? And Shayla? And Scott and Sophia? cool!

Another question: Scott and Sophia know about Hayden. How? And how were they best friends since the age of 4?

(sorry, some stuff mentioned in earlier chapters - its all kinda comeing back to me just now.

Awesome, again.

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 11 . 8/19/2008
wow... carlisle lost it... yipes!

okay... why does shayla know everything?


again, you rule!

and that's a funny quote. haha! ugh... my name end in a vowel. lol.


and completely true. -sigh-

and that sneak peak is EVIL.

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 10 . 8/19/2008
ew... I really don't like shayla.

No offense to the awesomeness that is Ashel-13, because she is the shit.

Seriously, you two are the freaking BEST!

anyways, something is about to go DOWn at the Cullen household. Dun Dun DUN.

And that sneak peak does nothing to dissolve that theory. At all.

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 9 . 8/19/2008
I'm guessing Bella showed up, right?


LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 8 . 8/19/2008
wow... a little defensive there Hayd.

GAH! Those sneak peaks KILL me! torture they are.

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 7 . 8/19/2008
Rose and Edward not bickering staying home together? AHAH!

Oh, and from that sneaky little peak into the future, I'm guessing that Hayden is going to have to deal with edward when heading down to Shayla's and then la push. DUN DUN DUN

Prepared to be follow for the rest of your life Hayd!

Awesome chapter once again HMC! you rule!

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 3 . 8/19/2008
aw! he cries too!

-in unison wiht the other fan girls- AWE!

Love him!

If he falls for Bella... i'll hurt you too.

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 2 . 8/19/2008
dude... your character - who happens to be you i think -haha- rules!

ah! funny!

love it!

LlamaLlamaNewt chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
well this is a new one... cool!

i swear to god... if he gets imprinted, or falls for a wolf... i'll hurt you.

alright... i'm done.

continue on your way while i continue reading. sound good?


Eshizz chapter 25 . 8/19/2008
I really love this chapter.


i am also a fan of your story with ashel-13, "Total Eclipse of the Heart."

i love the plot line.

update soon.
speedsONEandONLY chapter 25 . 8/19/2008
just so you know,

as im typing this,

you have 409 reviews.

Edward seems to be more fatherly

towards Hayden than brotherly.

why is that?

or will we find out in time?

(i had to ask, it was eating at me.)

they also might wann back up some.

you know, just incase Hayden loses his temper.

i am also quite sad that i was not number 400.

edwardcullenissosexy chapter 25 . 8/19/2008
good. update soon. sorry for the sucky review, im upset at something.

however, i cant wait to read more of your story :)
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