|Reviews for One With You|
| Bones2014 chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Wow, just as hot! Amazing. Glad you decided to give both POV. Interesting & satisfying, x 2:-) That Temperance Brennan is one damn lucky woman!
| Fluffybird chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Hard to say which was better...wooo.
| VENZwife chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
God, you are incredibly fantastically gifted at writing smut. This story, and the one before it from Booth's POV is one of the hottest fics on here!
You rock! Please keep writing!
| DaLiza chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I'm so glad you did Brennan's POV too. Fantastic work yet again!
| In-need-of-coffee chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Yeap... I'm a Mia junky... :)
| jems chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I just read the Booth POV story and jumped right into this one and right away I am loving the differences when you tell of Brenna's day. She wakes up all satisfied and "stretching my trapezius and deltoid muscles." - you used the proper names! It makes me immediately believe this is Brennans POV and not Booth!. And then you have words like "dreamily" and heavenly" - so feminine. Very clever writing.
"And anthropologically speaking, men often find erections of that magnitude to be indicative of their… prowess, displaying them prominently."
Ok and Now I am pissing myself! This is SO Brennan! LMAO!
and then "He looks horrified, and I almost smile at the flash of fear that sweeps over his face – it’s something I rarely see."
This is brilliant writing! I love how you manage to slip in a hint of the background story of their relationship and emotion into such a tiny moment in a story - it's really quite a talent.
"and I see, I know now what he meant that night, what he wanted me to understand. This is no dream or fantasy…
This fic is just as perfect as the other. I'm so glad you did Brennan's POV aswell. It really completes the story - especially when she realises her own dream was about Booth. Makes it easier to see why she grabbed his erection in the first place.
| geekischic chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Great sequel! Loved it just as much as the first. :)
| BonesDBchippie chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
A most EXCELLENT smutterifically HOT companion to "NiaD"! M, wasn't that just a totally wonderful, definitley "mind blowing" way to wake up! I know I'd of been jazzed to enjoy my day! Lov'd her little realization that she'd not been able to remember how many months it been since she'd had a "sexual partner"! And GAWD that would just be so AWESOME to be presented with such a yummy sight (albeit unexpected!) but if anyone can recover quickly and move that brain at lightening speed...it'd be her! LOL! LOV'D when her dream flashed before her eyes-oh yeah, mind blowing! TERRIFIC alternate POV on the bathroom scene and just lov'd lov'd lov'd the ending! It was my absolute favorite part [well, aside from the smut of course!] "...I was empty and now we’re joined together, and I’m unable to even feel or understand where one of us ends and the other begins. Instead of closing my eyes, I meet his own, my whole body flushed and rolling with his, and I see, I know now what he meant that night, what he wanted me to understand. This is no dream or fantasy…
We’re one." -OMG! I've read it like 4 times now! PHENOMENAL! Gives me flutterbies and shivers! WooHOO!
| quelea chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
what a great complement to Booth's POV. loved getting both perspectives.
| animeLCgrl chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
So HOT! You definitely need to update more, especially with this story, I'd love to see how this is going. _
| inzaghina chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
Absolutley perfect anding.. he finally made her understand what becoming one is. I think I like thisd one more that the compaion-piece, because it has a deeper meaning.. they're both great though.
| mumrulz chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Well if that was redundent... then you can continue to be so!
I really enjoyed seeing this from both POVs.
This was again hot & steamy...& I don't just mean the water in the shower.
I liked the way that Brennan wasn't embarrassed, but more flattered when she realized that the dream involved her.
**I’m in my partner’s dreams, turning him on, bringing him to the brink? All while he bickers with me about my choice of topics, shushing me any time i reference sex? He's at home, hard for me?
Dear god. That’s the sexiest thing I’ve ever heard in my entire life.
...loved it., the irony that he won't talk sex with her, but dreams of it with her. And she finds it such a turn on!
I would like to see another chapter (at least)added to this, to see what happens after the shower, do they admit to any feelings, do they make it to work, how Brennan will handle not being able to wear her clothes, how they react to this encounter, do they continue with new aspect to their relatonship...so many possibilities to continue with.
Loved it as usual. :-):-):-)
| jenmo4981 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
You just made my craptastic day a bazillion times better.
| Dancing-Phalanges75 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Genius literary genius. How do you write how you do.
| odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Loved the first fic. Love this fic. It is funny when you showed the different POVs when they meet each other at the door.