Reviews for Forever Alone
DarthBubbles chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Awh, so emotional. I pretty much wanted to scream "NO REV! U AIN'T A NOBODY" near the end... but that wouldn't do much, would it?

But this was still very very good. Even tho it made me sad. (
bronzeraven chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Very nice. I love how the emotion and the message of the poem are woven through the words. I can almost hear Revan's voice reading over the words as she's writing them, with a note of desperation as she's trying to put the words together in a way that he'll understand what she's trying to get across. Once again, I love the way your words flow.

skywalker05 chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
Pretty good rhythm & emotion.
almostinsane chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Great poem! Poor Revan... Would her love be Carth in this? Thanks for writing this! God bless!