Reviews for Lightning
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Great story.
dismembered constellations chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
That made me cry...wow. This is fantastic.
dismembered constellations chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
That made me cry...wow. This is fantastic.
Lemon Drop Lie Detector chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
This is so intense and emotionally powerful. It gets across the feeling of the Battle of Hogwarts in a fairly accurate way, and the hopeless confusion that is war in general. It was really interesting how he focused on small things, like rainbows, and the color of her eyes, and breathing, as though he couldn't handle much more than that. Very very good!
Megayn Ray chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Dear Jo,

I am very upset with you.

This made me sad.

5
RandomDream chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Oh.

Lovely, in a haunting and tragic way.

He will be remembered.
MudBlood15 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
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I like this one! I'm usually not a fan of one-shots. But i really liked this!

It was so deep, it was so good! I love all of the questions, and the 'fucking rainbow' and the 'clearly paradice' and the whole thing with survival being important, and yet it hurt, so why?

OMGoodness I really liked it. This is amazing writing.

I'll have to read some of your other stories.

Good job, it really was sad, it really like, delievered.
HogwartsHeadGirl1 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
such a good story!
C. S. Sprouse chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
This piece is simply beautiful. Very well done. The imagery you used is amazing, and it doesn't feel contrived. You put a very unique spin on a common plot, and the details that you wrote were just so raw with pain. I really loved it.
dark-hearted rose chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
This has to be your best one yet. It's breathtaking. I love the way you write this pairing.