|Reviews for Ransom|
| The Jumble Book chapter 18 . 5/22/2013
A good fic, the end was well done!
| Sonorous Serendipity chapter 18 . 4/13/2012
That was just completely.. wow. I love how you didn't make L overly mushy or OOC, or any other characters for that matter. Only one thing that I disagree with. L would've probably put Light to death and then have it haunt him his wh-. Actually, if I really thought about it.. L IS selfish, so maybe? Ah, sorry for my mini rant. Great story, and on my favorites. :)
| SoraVun chapter 18 . 3/13/2012
Amazing..totally FAV IT,
luv ur writing style,the plot,the suspense,the climax & truly sweet ending!
looking forward more of ur DEATH NOTE FF.
- Elaine/sora -
| Azhmyr Athena Le-Fay chapter 18 . 9/12/2011
I love it very much very well written
| Mary Lou chapter 18 . 10/23/2010
This was absolutely awesome! Normally, I submit reviews on nearly every chapter of a story. However, I was so riveted to this story, that I read the entire thing in one setting. Despite some grammatical errors, this was a very well thought out story with some great ideas. I enjoy reading long fanfictions, and this was one of the very best that I have ever read. You have a flair for writing convincing and descriptive scenes that enable your readers to envision what you are writing, making your work believable and realistic. This is how most of us would have loved the series to have ended. Thank you.
| Monk Gyatso chapter 18 . 6/13/2010
I liked the story, especially with how Light was forced to see reason again. I believe killing Light was not the solution in the story but rather reminding him of his own mortality. That would have made Light/Kira much more benevolent and moral.
| auburn.gaze chapter 18 . 6/12/2010
Just read everything in one night :)
Really loved the story even though there were scenes where I was like "Nooooooo" and "Waaaaaaa" hehehe I loved how there was a bit of shounen ai too.
Thanks for the wonderful story! :D
| Virgo Angel Phoenix chapter 18 . 3/15/2010
omg i loved this story!
this is exactly how the anime SHOULD have ended no near, no mellow, just l and light! thank you
| Senshi'sBard chapter 18 . 3/7/2010
I severely enjoyed this. As in, I think it's a crime how much I liked it. DON'T KILL ME, KIRA!
...er bad jokes.
Anyway, very nice job! Your plot made me spasm in happiness. :D
| kayura sanada chapter 13 . 2/12/2010
Uh-oh. I'm feeling a moral-of-the-story coming on. In any case, the tension is good. _ Other than the 'morals' T's preaching, the dialogue's believable, as well.
Just watch out for the blatant let's-change-his-perception tactics, and try to go about it as if you didn't mean to do it at all.
| kayura sanada chapter 9 . 2/11/2010
_ Oi, oi, Light. You're such a goody-goody underneath all of the insane killing. :D
The tension's really good, and I'm definitely feeling the same frustration with these two that I did during the anime. Well done!
Okay, next chapter! _
| kayura sanada chapter 6 . 2/11/2010
...And my comp crashed.
So here I am again, after having found this place once more! And I'm really annoyed, and I want to go straight into the next chapter, so ja!
| kayura sanada chapter 5 . 2/11/2010
lol. Hospitable gentlemen, for people who enjoy torturing teenagers. _ Okay, on to the next chapter!
| kayura sanada chapter 3 . 2/11/2010
_ Yes, this is thoroughly entertaining. I'm really curious about how the two will react to all this.
Okay, i usually try to make nice, long, pretty reviews, but I really want to go on in the story, so it's difficult to pause the reading long enough to give you a proper review. And you left it at a cliffhanger, so I absolutely MUST continue. Ja!
| kayura sanada chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
You have some grammatical mistakes, but the story's interesting so far, and this is my first attempt at reading a Death Note story, so I'm rather interested in this. Yay! _ I've put off reading a story on Death Note because I've been afraid of getting burned, so to speak, but this is really entertaining, and I'm only one chapter in. Fixing the mistakes would make this story absolute gold.
Okay, I'm on to the next chapter. Ja!