|Reviews for Love Is Watching Someone Die|
| little vampire 93 chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
Nomads... Gone ... With ...them
But but but ...
Please say she comes back... I mean she has to doesn't she there are still 8 chapters left
| dbpbatm chapter 17 . 6/12/2013
Thanks for sharing this!
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 17 . 3/29/2013
This was so cute. I loved it so much. Ahhh.
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 16 . 3/29/2013
awwwweeeee So glad she didnt kill a human. lol
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 15 . 3/29/2013
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 14 . 3/29/2013
oh gosh this is so good. only three more chapters to read til the end eh so good
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
| Vampfan1 chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
Wait a minute. Obviously you are telling a fairytale if you just had Edward tell newborn Bella she was free to leave but to just "stay away from humans for a while." That's it? no details on how she at this stage is the highest predator on the food chain and that her thirst for blood will take over everything in her life for at least a couple of years. He doesn't know she's a shield and hell I don't even know if you are making her one in your story so that even makes her even more dangerous. So again I ask you, why are you having him just tell her its ok for her to leave. Where are the other cullens and why aren't they there to help with her new transition? Not to mention she was just beaten and gang raped as a human and even though she has just been changed, that is still in her mind and she has to be having some feelings about her attack. I hope you go deeper into this in the next few chapters because right now it all seems a little to vague and nonexplanatory. I am enjoying the basic premise and twist of the story and how you changed the book and all but it seems pretty general right now. I don't know if you are a young author or new to writing ( if you are I support and applaude your efforts) but I am hoping you will dig deeper into your character developement. So far(except for your description of her pain during her change), it seems like her attack and change have been about as distressing as having your order at McDonalds messed up. AKA...no biggie. And really the lack of explanations from Edward about what her new reality means is laughable. You are free to go? Really? Curious where you are gonna take this b/c in every story I have read, a basic premise is that a newborn has to be taken from society to learn to adjust and have control.
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 13 . 3/16/2013
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 11 . 3/16/2013
Oh, if James thinks he is gonna rape Bella again, I think he has another thing coming and it won't be pretty.
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 8 . 3/16/2013
Awww, the end of Rose's talk with Bella made me cry a little.
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
Edward, Edward, Edward, if only you'd get your ridiculously beautiful head out of your ass...
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
AWESOME chapter and cliffhanger at the end!
| SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
That. Was. AMAZING!
| kinsano chapter 17 . 8/25/2012
Good! Finally! It was good!