Reviews for It's Better When I Bleed For You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Come backFinish the story it’s so good to see a strong Bella finally! |
![]() ![]() ![]() EEEH! I love that last line |
![]() ![]() ![]() Post post post ypu told us you would finsh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Karma for "it'll be like i never existed" |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is bella going to do when she is questioned by the police? she most certainly won't be able to take a lie detector test. |
![]() ![]() Are you going to finish this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! I really enjoyed it please dont say you've left? I realize it's been awhile since your last update but hopefully you keep writing xxx |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't be too perfect. They worry on that too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredible! I hope you're well and that maybe you'd consider writing more... Have a great day! XO |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi, i recently read your story...i absolutely love it, please dont leave it :( |
![]() ![]() I don't get all this lanna b.s...cause I really don't give a shit about her character so I basically just skipped over the shit about her...don't care anyway does bella really not know how to fight? has she one nothing but go to school for years? ...sad seems like you could do soooo much with 80 years and not ever getting tired...she should have turned her heart break into anger... ook I don't know if that's the best way to go...but I like a strong female lead ya know...bella all sad and shit bothers me... anyway like your story! just not pathetic bella and lanna |
![]() ![]() kissing my vampre sweetheart? did she really just say that? she sounded like an old lady just then...thought she was frozen at 17...hmmm guess not I expected more from bella...she had a human love for Edward...shes never seen him as a vmpire...her as a vampire...so its not like she felt that all incompasing mate type shit...soooo I don't get why she hasn't gotten over his ass...its pathetic really he broke up with her! of course she should have moved thefuck on...you think all the single vampires out there are monks? ya I doubt that |
![]() ![]() I sure hope this story comes back to life! It truly is a great story and I hope to see where it goes! Hope all is well! |
![]() ![]() I have seen all (well, not ALL, there are way to many for that) & I would really love to read this story, based on how well your other one is...But I hate to read uncompleted stories that'll leave me hanging for a long time, so, I thought "what the heck, why not ask", right? What I ask is; will you be finishing this story? The update is very late so I'm not sure if you'll even respond, but, thank you for reading my rambling explanation (if you are)! A (possibly annoying) reader, Bella xoxo |