Reviews for Dark Side of the Moon
The Car Chick chapter 24 . 2/1
I know that this review is years late, but I have just discovered your stories here. You are a wonderful writer. My favorite thing in this chapter was the princess bride reference. Awesome. Lol. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing talent with the rest of us.
cearay chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
this story was fantastic. you have captured edward's perpective flawlessly in every way. his conflicting emotions, the deepness of his love for bella, and his speech were all precisely in character. i was quite impressed with this fanfiction, i couldn't stop reading!
cjj chapter 4 . 8/12/2016
beautiful, great talent for writing. Great vocabulary/insight/dialogues. hanks for sharing this with us.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2016
This was amazing story. After reading the released portion of midnight sun, I've wanted to hear more from Edward's point of view and this did not dissapoint. I really appreciate your writing and flow in this and As Bella Sleeps; which was also very well written. The voice of Edward is so appropriate and true to his character. I loved how it matched perfectly to the original story line of New Moon, and still added insight into the other half of the story we never got to hear. I could really identify with Edward's suffering, and it invoked some pain and emotion in me as well. I loved Dark Side of the Moon very much, and look forward to reading more of your work.
alaskanbirdfriend chapter 18 . 4/30/2016
I'm reading this in the middle of the night
alaskanbirdfriend chapter 14 . 4/30/2016
I keep forgetting to review, the story is so good!
alaskanbirdfriend chapter 10 . 4/30/2016
Hello this is one of the best fan fictions I have read so far.
alaskanbirdfriend chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
Pretty good. I like the argument with Alice description.
Jenandberry chapter 16 . 3/30/2016
Brilliant chapter - ive wondered before when reading new moon whether Alices comments on the plane were a premeditated plan for showing Bella would be changed in case it was needed, or just coincidence. Poor Marcus...
jk chapter 6 . 2/23/2016
Bella comes off as clingy, weak and desparate. Not to mention pathetic. Its really kinda sad yet I'm not sad for her. The bella in this fic is not for Edward. I feel like he could do so much better.
I absolutely hated the way she acted on her birthday. The ungrateful little wretch. Also she kept trying to play the birthday card even though she had already told Edward to act like it wasn't it birthday. Its like she a total little attention whore..but just acts like she doesn't like attention...I kinda hate this bella...HATE
jk chapter 4 . 2/23/2016
bella made a very not funny joke about carlise being able to sew faster then any other doctor shes had...and Edward says...they both laughed OBLIVIOUS TO THE SOURCE OF THE HUMOR...bellas injury

? wth?
How could bella be oblivious to the source? shes the one who just got stitches...shes the one joking about please tell me how she in oblivious? stupid writer...fucking up shit...making Edward seem like a fucktard...dumbass
jk chapter 2 . 2/23/2016
bellas has crossed aline from I'm poor I don't want my rich friends buying me stuff cause it makes me feel inadequate to I'm a ungrateful little wretch and treat my friends like shit.

Alice already bought a gift, wrapped it probably, its in her fucking hand...and bella says "no gifts"?
she went through the trouble of fucking getting it for you the least you can do is fucking open it you stupid little cunt...then you can count your lucky fucking stars that someone even fucking bothers over your worthless ass
Guest chapter 24 . 1/20/2016
Really great job with this story - good flow and not just a nearly identical re-print of New Moon. You also stay true to the characters. Best EPOV I have read. Thanks for taking the time to write it and share!

dinotopian chapter 23 . 12/15/2015
Rereading! So good! Thank you!
seoyeon chapter 24 . 11/29/2015
I loveeeeeeeeeeeee thiss story so much. I absolutely adore it! Please keep writing this story or a new moon, eclipse and breaking dawn one. Pleaseeeeeeee
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