|Reviews for Dark Side of the Moon|
| twilightfanwriter chapter 8 . 5/4/2010
wow. i am depressed, and yet completely taken with the way you portray his point of view. his conflicting desires are so tragic and poignant it's almost unbearable. i have actually always been team jacob, but you're making a believer out of me.
especially all of the detail you wrote about with the imagery - how he thought to lure her into the forest to kill her, and now that's where he's going to "die" - i think that's where the tears started streaming (as opposed to trickling).
| Dawn20p chapter 13 . 5/4/2010
oh oh wrong again, i don't know were you learnt about Argentina, but:
argentina is a country where you can find a great variety of races! and a about any skin colour you want! we are multicultural, and proud of it!
And it also has an inmense varieties of weathers! were are not always bless by the sun!
i still like your story! but i get a little annoyed when movies, books or whatever, describes my country in a wrong way! don't you think you would feel the same way? sorry for any writing mistakes, english is not my language!
people have affectionate ways? maybe that's true, ja ja!
| Dawn20p chapter 12 . 5/4/2010
first let me tell you I love your story!
but... i have a complaint! Argentina is in America! and by America I mean the contient, not the United states!all the people that lives in this continent are americans (from north to south)! so edward wouldn't be leaving the continent!
| Dawn20p chapter 3 . 5/3/2010
this is spectacular! you are a great writer! your description of the characters is extremely accurate, it's amazing! because you write not only from edward's POV, but you describe what everybody is thinking! i've only read 3 chapters but this is one of my favourite fanfiction stories ever,'cause is so freaking great! even though this part of the story is sad!
| demelza12 chapter 23 . 4/28/2010
God I love you..
LOL alright.. let me explain..
I've spent the last couple of.. well weeks I think, reading this..
you got every freakin' thing right..! I have read stories where Edward gets drunk.. I mean, do your research!
but you.. even the part about the biology teacher with the crush.. right out of an interview with meyer herself.. just awesome!
a really moving story.. I have really enjoyed it.. could have been written by meyer herself.. very, very good..
(now I'm going to enjoy the outtake)
| Jestak chapter 22 . 4/24/2010
This was a very lovely story. There is a real embarrassment of riches when it comes to fanfics that give us New Moon from an alternate POV, and this is one of the very best. A few favorite things of mine: your handling of Jasper throughout the story, including the motivation for his vote in favor of turning Bella; Edwards worst imaginable mental torture being the "Small World" song; and Esme reading Edward the riot act: "You've tried to make the decision for her."
| Milk40 chapter 22 . 4/22/2010
Actually, you are so talented that it makes all the other writers on Fanfic look poorly skilled.
| loveforwild chapter 23 . 4/20/2010
You are amazing! Your writing talent far surpasses Stephanie's, although I love her for her creations. Are you sure you won't consider writing Eclipse from Edward's point of view? I would be all over it like a chocolate covered Edward!
| ElektraLane chapter 24 . 4/19/2010
I really enjoyed this! I cried more times than I could count through this story. I loved when Emmett got mad at Edward for breaking the TV. The way you had Charie react was great! Very emotional story and well written!
| robsten63 chapter 15 . 4/19/2010
wow this is very good :) your a great writer!
| shasamp chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
This story is so good-I think I have cried more thru this than I did when I read New Moon !
| NKubie chapter 23 . 4/14/2010
Great story. You really did your homework - it shows.
| NKubie chapter 16 . 4/13/2010
"They say the path to hell is paved with good intentions – I'd just upgraded it to a super highway." Love this line! I also love the Edward/Marcus parallels.
| NKubie chapter 13 . 4/12/2010
Great chapter. Also thanks for the suggestion regarding the outtakes from the SM website. It really ads to the story.
| NKubie chapter 12 . 4/11/2010
I'm glad we're making progress toward Italy. Is the thing about Carlisle's pilgrimage during the solstice something from NM? Just wondering.