Reviews for Dark Side of the Moon
abbyweyr chapter 16 . 4/29/2014
Rereading parts again. Mentioned not knowing what Caius talent might be...I think it isn't so obvious a talent as most have, more one of strategy - perhaps both in a military and courtroom sense. I imagine they had some battles before finally coming out on top and then dealing with the Romanians, Caius seems the type to have planned those battles and once the trio were settled on top switched to courtroom strategy. Just a thought. Enjoying reading this every time.
divyvicki chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
I'm definitely intrigued. Can't wait to read more. Sunflower Songs recommended this.
jodi.k.gonzalez chapter 8 . 1/12/2014
OMG.. What great writing and sentiments from Edward...Cant put it down on with the next chapter..P.S. Thanks for snippets of up coming chapters .
Pats2nd chapter 18 . 1/8/2014
Of all of the New Moon stories I've read from Edward's POV this is far and away the best. I read it almost as often as I read the actual book. Excellent job.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
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shp913 chapter 13 . 11/5/2013
this is soooo depressing and monotonous
i am skipping to the interesting parts
Good writing, by the way
Karolsp chapter 24 . 8/18/2013
I loved your story sooo much! I wish you could consider come back to the fandom a write more stories! You're sooo true to Edward giving him the chance to show how hard it was for him even if was consequences of his wrong decisions! You make me really appreciate New Moon and love Edward even more! Your story is so well written, rich in details, a very easy and enjoyable reading! Please come back!
ginnypotter1596 chapter 20 . 8/14/2013
Halfway through the "vote", I realized, well maybe remembered, that that was one of the answered questions on SM'S website, so you made a small backstory to it. Nice. PS I hate New Moon, because Edward left,and I don't like Jacob's character because he's trying to steal away Bella when she already has a boyfriend. Come on now, Jacob, In Eclipse, Edward's back, so back the hell off. Thank you and goodbye.
meelee72 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Ok.. I can't hold back anymore.. I only learned about fanfiction bout 2 yrs ago & I read sently for over a year.. - Finally created an account so I could interact w/ authors, altho I'm late to this world, as I see it goes back to, like, '08, '07... Thruout allbof this, I have seen & heard ur name, & ur stories have obviously been reccomended. - The real honest truth is, I held back becuz I knew u'd be good, & when I 1st started reading, I must say, I was pretty snooty... Once I read a story & had a certain version in my head, I didn't wanna steer away from that.. (ima weirdo)- Or, I was... Because, I realized in limiting myself that way, I was missing out on some ridiculously amazing stories & talents.. (i'm a reader, not a writer)- Once I broadened my horizens, I realised the talent in ff is limitless... Anyway! - I said all that to say, I cannot pass ur name up any longer... Almost EvErYoNe speaks SO highly of u, here I am.
- Read the prolouge & I can already see ur brilliance...
... Being so "late to the game, I sometimes review stories & not get any response cuz some writers seem to have lost interest... - But, I have come across some amazingly sweet & gracious authors who will respond to me... - I love review responses like authors love reviews. :)
- Anyway, all that said, (& i'm sorry i'm rambling), I'm going to embark on ur story becuz I already know it's great... Plus, I know I'll enjoy it. ;)
Yay, me! & u! :)))
RavioliRavioli chapter 8 . 8/2/2013
Dun dun dun! Oh how exciting this will be. Can't wait to see what Edward was up to while Bella was hallucinating with him and getting closer to Jacob.
RavioliRavioli chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
Loving the angst!
RavioliRavioli chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
Aww man :( the sad part is coming up...
RavioliRavioli chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
Ahhh this chapter was awesome! Love this scene from Edward's POV.
DeliciousCarrot chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Wow this is incredibly well written. Props to you and your writing prowess. Great New Moon Fic, you can't imagine how tiresome the usual abandoned while pregnant fics can get.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
kya mast hai re wow
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