Reviews for The Natural Order of The World
Hewhoislost chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
This would be a great set up for a new fic, but it stands on its own as a one shot as well. Great work.
Wolfgate227 chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Brilliant, they story was perfectly weighted and them getting together around that time in their lives makes so much sense. Great job, keep up the good work.
Twisteddarkness225 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
For what it's worth i agree with your view about how Shego and Kim would end up like this. It certainly felt believable, like seeing some long lost episode of the show. It was touching and thoroughly enjoyable, great work.
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
You made me cry. This is so wonderful. Love the last line.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
"Your losing your touch Pumpkin"
You're losing your touch, Pumpkin. - FTFY
Redline57 chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This was awesome, I loved it!
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
One doesn't often see a fanfic involving "mature" versions of the standard characters. This was quite refreshing, and not just for the acceptance of the passage of time and the realism that entails; I also appreciate the MATURE approach to the relationship that they evince. Good job. And thank you for sharing.
Hallow Avengence chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
AW! - this is perfect.
Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Written well enough, but I can't relate.
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
They wait too long.
Yaoi-Lover-Yoko chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
i think i cried. this is beautifful
woowoo chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Kay8abc chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
I love this story. It is very well done, and I really like how you put them much older. It makes the story so much better.

WerePuppy-Jake chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
that's so cute O
Coot chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Very enjoyable! It is a nice change to see older versions of K & S.
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