Reviews for Passing Afternoon
Veridissima chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Sad and sweet
Miss A chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
This was really excellent! I think you got the dialogue absolutely spot on, brilliant!
Squeeka Cuomo chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
As you know, I know nothing about the West Wing except the little bit you told me. I’m happy to say that with that little bit of background I was still able to enjoy this. I loved the setting. I could really sense the humid weather with the details you chose (the hot trunk lid and sweat in particular). The dialogue was really nice. I loved the little sarcastic jabs even though they totally weren’t helping Danny’s case. :P Plus I think you did a really nice job of illustrating this relationship in its infancy. There were sweet little moments where people seemed to let their guards down and I really enjoyed that. There weren’t many so that made them even more special. Great job!