|Reviews for Momentum|
| reader2008 chapter 5 . 7/19/2008
damn! that was soo good, jb. off to read fusion.
sorry it took me soo long to read.
sorry, i didn't leave a review for each chapter. i was anxious to read the chapters. lol.
| lucindadixon chapter 5 . 6/8/2008
Can't wait for Fusion...a promising title for sure. I love this series.
| an-ocean-in-the-sky chapter 5 . 6/7/2008
Already reviewed at LJ, but I see here you answered the question about continuing this. Fusion sounds promising. I love this whole series so much.
| daisyb10 chapter 5 . 6/7/2008
Wood on wood ... the sound Cameron's been waiting to hear!
Beautiful chapter, JB. Can't wait for "Fusion".
| daisyb10 chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
Finally, House's dreams are starting to make sense. This chapter got me thinking about how much faith I put in my dreams - I suppose it depends on whether they're good or bad ... how about you?
Very nicely written, my friend. And dare I say it? I felt a smidgen of hope at the end.
| Limaccia chapter 4 . 6/3/2008
| Iditarod chapter 4 . 6/3/2008
I'm speechless... can't wait for more :D
BTW this seems way more realistic than some of the other fics I've read... :3
| daisyb10 chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
I started thinking about relationships after I read this chapter of "Momentum" and it struck me how often I behave like House and Cameron. Our lives could be so much simpler if we were brave enough to share our feelings with the ones we love.
Beautiful chapter, JB.
| Limaccia chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
Ah, back to that most emotional ending question. At least it doesn't hurt so much hearing it from House's perspective.
But, from HIS perspective, this was great:
Now you know.
You slide toward the edge of the booth. You don’t need or want to hear the rest. She doesn’t want you. The reasons don’t matter, the apologies don’t matter. All that matters is that she never suspects that wasn’t the answer you wanted to hear.
| lucindadixon chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
I loved this scene the first time I read it, and I love it even more knowing his thoughts as well.
| Limaccia chapter 2 . 5/28/2008
"House & Cameron might possibly end up together."
Especially in light of the continuing depressing actions of the show itself, if it's not too late, I heartily vote for that.
We Hamerons NEED something to counter what they've been showing us ("bait & switch" - lead us along from the very start, then, poof! presto-change-o, it's Cuddy, or any female OTHER than Cam)
| daisyb10 chapter 2 . 5/27/2008
"You’re old, or at least today you feel it. You haven’t opened yourself up to someone in a long, long time. If you do, and she doesn’t want what you have to give…you don’t think you’ll be able to put everything back again."
My favourite part ... it makes me think of those wooden ball puzzles. If you take one apart, it's fiendishly difficult to make it whole again ... just like House.
| Limaccia chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Memo To Self:
Do NOT read these stories at the office. Too much crying.
That said, I'm dying to see House's POV at the bar.
| Iditarod chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
so cool! I absolutely loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter... your writing is so addicting :D
| daisyb10 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
"Flick, thump, catch. Flick, thump, catch."
What a great way to set the scene! You captured his pensive mood perfectly and I couldn't help but think what a huge leap it is for House to accept the fact that he does, indeed, think of Cameron. The old House wouldn't admit that to anyone, least of all himself.
Nice start to Momentum, JB.