I love this story so far! Griffin/OC fanfictions are in short supply, especially well written ones, so I really appreciate you taking the time to write this. I'm excited to see where this story is going!

BritanyJean

I'm so glad my review inspired you to continue your story! I'm also completely pleased with the update. I kind of assumed that Millie and Mercy would conspire something while the boys were out acting macho.

I'm looking forward to the next update! I wonder what's going to happen at dinner? It seems unlikely that a group of jumpers could actually get away with doing something normal without Paladin's sticking their fat noses in their business. :)

It's great that you're writing again, it's a brilliant story. I am also glad that you haven't let your dislike of David turn him into a character that's not him. Brilliant chapter.

Soundtrack! Brilliant! Molto Bene! What kind of stuff is on it and where can I access the list? Speaking of bladed weapons, are any of the characters swordsmen? A Jump/Swordfight would be awsome... or fantastic. Not sure which word I like better.

It's very good so far. Aren't you being a little unfair to David? Griffin DID try to blow up his girlfriend. I'm not exactly a people expert but I'm pretty sure that's a bad thing. Great stuff anyway.

Brilliant starter. I think Griffin is a brilliant character worthy of his own story. Thanks. If you don't like David so much, have you considered making him a better character?

JDKHDJFNNDBDKFBD I LOVE YOU. I seriously had a double take and then a spas attack when I saw this at the top of my 'most recently updated' 33

Ahaha, poor Griff, having to dress nicely just to see David. Looking forward to seeing how wonderfully that dinner goes, hah!

And don't feel too bad 'bout not updating for so long, I'm just grateful you went back to it' it's a good story3 Most people don't have the courage to even continue something after taking such a long hiatus, so props to you!

So, I know it's been nearly two bloody years since you updated, but a return would be totally AWESOME. This is a great story and you should totally finish it! Please! This has to be one of the best Jumper fics I've ever read and it's abandoned!

Life gets chaotic, that I know. But, if you find the time, please finish this story!

Culd you please update this? It's utterly fantastic andit REALLY needs a conclusion. Don't make me beg.

Wow, you really need to effin' update, my friend.

An addictive read with good, constant characterization... I feel like one of those reviews on the backs of books. "Two thumbs up!" or something to that effect.

I think that you must write another chapter. I've sinned in this same way, leaving readers out to dry... but my hypocrisy in leaving such a review, urging you to do exactly what I have not, is a sign of how enthralling your fic is.

So, uh... please?

Eh, each to his or her own.

I don't think Griffin would be that comfy with someone new so quickly, even and especially since she's a girl. Sorry, just my opinion. Excellent writing, though, I love all the little details.

Wow,okay,this is nuts and the story is blurring in my mind s it's past midnight... um, so, Griffin is gonna get back at David by killing his mom? Sorry, I'm only on chapter three... Great story. Almost like a book. The chapters are the perfect length and there's some boring stuff in between the action bits... Excellent writing,really. I'm still a bit confused... will have to favorite this story and read it later, when I've had enough caffeine... Good job, though.

update soon.!

This is was quite an interesting story:D Very fast paced and it worked really well with the plot & your writing style. I loved how you generalized things (like Griffin just jumped to Burger King and came back) but yet you still allowed little details to slip in.

I was kind of hoping not for this to turn into a Griffin/OC but then I rethought it about learning more about Mercy. She's quite a lovable character:) And her slight cluelessness helps alot. I loved the part where she was being all spy! It really showed the reader (aka me) what she was made of and how Paladins harden Jumpers into killing-machines (*coughcough*Griffin*coughcough*).

Hope you update really soon and I would love to see at the end of this story, the 'soundtrack'! (P.S.- I want a Griffin Plushie too!)

~Penmaster51

lol i like the pictures! :)