|Reviews for Everything's Not Lost|
| HeatherSS1 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Things would've been so different if Remy had someone that night, huh? Wonderful story, full of sadness and hope at the same time.
| WonderousPlaceForAnEcho chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
great job at showing a range of emotions. I liked the dialog and how there's a lot of desperation in Remy's actions. How her knowledge of her impending death made her want to come home to her girlfriend and do something that made her feel alive and healthy. I imagine her girlfriend to be...sensitive and complimenting to 13's personality. I would imagine she look like...Michaela McManus, but that's just me, she looks younger than 13 so that seems possible. Overall that was very sad but I liked how 13 was opening up and how exhausting it is to do that and let yourself be so vulnerable and actually say the words out loud or hear them back to you is shocking and draining. that had a lot of weight to it, well done.
| freakykaethe chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
I love it, it's so sweet (:
I see "you" as a girl, too. I can't imagine a guy in this place "
| Pikaia chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
I really loved this. Well written, very well characterised - good work.
I imagined 'you' as a woman, too, but a bit older than Thirteen.
Thanks for this!
| krisana22 chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Great story. You should do more than just one-shots.
| bigblusky chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
wow.. thanks for this... at least somehow the day wasn't that full of sh*t at all.. so beautiful.. hope to see more of this kind from you.. )
| momentary-ecstasy chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
That was really great. I liked their dynamic. Very cool story.