Reviews for Disassembling Situations
sdaemare chapter 8 . 8/14/2008
Glad you had fun on your vacation. Missed your writing and your stories but it would seem that you're back with aplomb. Good chapter but then again you haven't written one that wasn't good. Glad you're back and I'm sincerely looking forward to your next chappie.
Agent of the Divine One chapter 8 . 8/14/2008
I honestly don't know anymore. Things were strained before and now the strain has caused the supports to buckle.

And there doesn't seem to be any way to put it back together.

It seems that all is lost.
Raven of Alaska chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
I can't believe it. Dick and Kori fought. Intensly, might I add. Scary. Never imagined they'd fight like that. Well done! Please say that Dick and Kori will someday mend their broken relationship. After he apologizes for saying that she's not human. She may be alien, but she's every bit as human as the rest of us. And she has a heart of gold.


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titanfan45 chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
Poor Kori. You did an excellent job of writing the argument between Dick and Kori. Gar's part was well done as well. Gar in Raven's room was awesome, especially when he was in her undergarment drawer.
Gun toten Girly chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
Uhh, :coughs: wow.

I mean, WOW wow. That was totally... just...

Agh! I'm COMPLETELY speechless right now.

Can you tell?

Let's start from the beginning then, shall we?

The story started off really... interesting :coughs: then drops to a sweet, romantic level.

Then things turned to a whole new level when he passed the hall.

I find it quite fascinating that you always start off with the idea of how you want your chapter to go. This one started off with Gar reminiscing about the team's initiation and what they were like when they were younger. Then he thought about how perfect life was now, and was extremely content.

Then you twist his idea and morph it into the exact opposite. It leaves me stunned, for a moment, before I finally take in all of what happened, why it happened, and how it ended.

This one especially.

Ya know, not to be rude to your characters, but I find Dick the most cowardly of the team here. He's afraid to lose Kori, but yet he doesn't step-up to the plate and take the responsibilities. Instead he runs from them.


Just my view.

Poor, poor Kori. God this is bringing back those memories when I was crying on my bed after reading half of New Moon, by Stephenie Meyer. I was practically bawling, and this is really bringing it all home to me.

I think I finally understan how fragile relationships could be.

Seriously unfortunate that I had to find out this way, but I'm still glad I did.

I await your next update!

-Gun toten Girly
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
great chapter, please update soon!
Wolvmbm chapter 8 . 8/13/2008
Poor Dick and Kori, but Ha-ha on Gar trying to be a spy on his girlfriend. :D

Please keep up the good work as this story progress. ;)
Raven of Alaska chapter 7 . 7/25/2008
Wow. She lied to Garfield... I never thought she'd do that. Then again, he was bugging her. BTW, Raven may be to smart to be Garfield's girlfriend, but she cares for him a lot. Not to mention she's in love with the green bean.


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FrostFaerie chapter 7 . 7/10/2008
That was a really nice chapter! Really emotional, and totally cool! Can't wait for more!
titanfan45 chapter 7 . 7/10/2008
That was a lot of reading! When you write a chapter with a lot of conversation, you don't fool around! This was well written and well thought out.
Gun toten Girly chapter 7 . 7/10/2008
Very, very nice chapter. It explains a lot with Cyborg and he finally got his chance to shine in your stories.

This was extremely interesting. I thought of Raven's predicament myself, and I was wondering if it was possible.

Great job portraying the emotional value of the characters and their personalities. I know I've told you time and time again, but you seriously have a gift at these things.

You really got down to the nitty-gritty in this chapter and explored some keys points. It's a good thing Gar is really perverted, or else she wouldn't have been able to tell Cyborg about her thoughts….

Wow that sounded REALLY wrong. Oh well, hopefully you know what I mean :D.

I await your next update!

-Gun toten Girly
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 7 . 7/10/2008
hahaha the ending was great :) I was wondering what happened to BB lol
Agent of the Divine One chapter 7 . 7/10/2008
Vic and Raven talking about sex is definitely good for a laugh. :D

And as much as it would be wished that it was just platonic phone calls somehow I don't think Dick's calls are just friendly in nature.

Only time will tell I suppose.
sdaemare chapter 6 . 6/30/2008
Good story. First off the tattoo is canon as I have the comic where she gets it and then chides Impulse for getting one too. Seeing as how his metabolism faded and erased the thing. Btw.. the scene with Rae and BB in bed... hawt. Also a bit curious as to why Nightwing was all happy... maybe I'm misinterpreting your writing but it almost seemed as though he might be feeling something toward Raven. *shrugs* I'm prolly wrong but I was like 'oh crap'. Anyway... the ending is great and suspenseful and I'm, as always, looking forward to the next episode.

Same BBRae time

Same BBRae channel.

titanfan45 chapter 6 . 6/28/2008
Nice job on this chapter. You are among the best writers that I've seen when revealing a character's thoughts. You put in a lot of detail in your chapters not often seen in fanfiction.
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