Reviews for Disassembling Situations
QuixoticQuest chapter 5 . 9/2/2009
Ha, ha. Way to ruin the moment BB, "You snore" that was too funny. I love this story.

-Don "QuixoticQuest" _
QuixoticQuest chapter 4 . 9/2/2009
Well, my review will be shorter because this chapter was a bit shorter, but I'll try to be detailed. I hope it works.

So nice job on the Raven/Star conversation, you paced it well and sure a little dialogue never hurt anybody, so I wouldn't worry about that.

What else... yeah, I smell trouble. If Robin and Cyborg are both gone then there's bound to be trouble. My force senses are tingling. _

(Sorry, out of context nerd reference, I'm big on SW).

May the force be with you!

-Don "QuixoticQuest"
QuixoticQuest chapter 3 . 9/2/2009
Okay, your author's note helped explain a lot. I could understand a little of what Robin was saying but yeah, it helped.

Anyways, this chapter was a nice changeup from the light heartedness that you've been doing (I love angst by the way) not that lightheartedness is a bad thing, but it's a good break from that to add more layers to the conflicts of all the characters).

Nice work!

-Don "QuixoticQuest" _
QuixoticQuest chapter 2 . 9/2/2009
Yeah, definitely try to balance out the Raven/BB stuff with some Jinx/Cyborg stuff. Sometimes over focus on two characters can make the story seem too weighted in one area and it loses the storyline- which doesn't have to just be a back forth of BB and Raven's relationship. It can be more than that, and I sicerely hope that that's what you plan to do because it'd be interesting to have a more external conflict. Be creative, that's why you're on FFN. _


-Don "QuixoticQuest"
QuixoticQuest chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Nice start to the new story. The tone is definitely different and you do a nice job of working in the time that's gone by without hitting the reader over the head with it.

Until the next chapter,

-Don "QuixoticQuest" _
gold-eyed hawk chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Milady it is high time you update this fic.

I mean I keep checkin twice a day it's that bad.

Please oh please oh please... Please?
Unknown Scribe chapter 23 . 8/24/2009
I Think this story is well written. I hope the next chapter is out soon,
Bell 06 chapter 22 . 8/16/2009
seriously i've read all of the chapters up to 23 and i really want you to continue how long is it gonna take for 24 to come gr (p.s excellent work)
Megaira chapter 23 . 7/21/2009
o.o wow!

great chapter and just wow!

can't wait to see what happens next! *please be happy news, please be happy news*
Bell 06 chapter 23 . 7/19/2009
WOW love it. I really wanna know what happens next. You are a very good writer. I enjoy your work.
nekoken chapter 23 . 7/17/2009
Great chapter and I really hope you update soon. You can't just leave us hanging like that can you, can you ;). well hope to see the next chapter really really soon. ... damn still not there. LoL keep up the good work and can't wait to read more
titanfan45 chapter 23 . 7/17/2009
I like the Didi character. He makes an excellent friend for Garfield. I hope Raven gets OK.
titanfan45 chapter 22 . 7/17/2009
Doesn't look too good for Raven. Garfield seems as if he will be ok in time. Thanks for the PM, it was appreciated.
titanfan45 chapter 21 . 7/16/2009
I've fell behind with this story. You're a great writer and I'm completely drawn into each chapter. There is an overwhelming sense of sadness in the most recent chapters and I wonder if there is any chance of a happy ending for any of the Titans, I certainly hope there is.
Agent of the Divine One chapter 23 . 7/16/2009
Other than Didi truly enjoying himself for the first time in months it seems that events continue to rush downhill towards the black hole waiting at the bottom.

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