Wow, this is such an impressive story. You capture Tony's thoughts so well throughout (I completely heard this in his voice), and I love how even though we know what happens from the episode, there's some real suspense in the first part over whether Gibbs and Maddie are going to survive. You really show how much Tony went through here, and I also lol'ed at his snarky thoughts about Ziva's bad English and wanting to push her in - such a nice change from the Tiva stories that there are way too many of!

SWEET

Man, you're a good writer!
Loved this!

Aww wow that was just wow. I have no words. Good job.

Well written! I wish someone on the team actually knew about ROTA!

Good one!

Great story!

Good story. Tracy

I absolutely loved this story. I love the style in which you wrote it. The description of everything that happens is really well done. You can follow through each of Tony's processes. I liked how Tony was totally in the moment and not thinking about what he had to do, just doing it, I imagine that's what happens when you're in an emergency situation. Thanks for making them spit water and coming back thanks to Tony's CPR, it's more realistic in my opinion then what they did on the show(although I have heard some weird 'coming back to life' stories from my mom who's a nurse, but it's extremely rare, so medically speaking, you're version is better) Also I have to say that I loved that phrase:" yep, the big guy was back in the building" I think Tony was quite in character. I can easily imagine him being so stubborn as to stay at the scene until the last car.I also liked the "play, replay, replay, the same scenes over and over" again, really realistic. By the way, I thought the ending with Abby calling him superman and mentioning Rota was a really nice touch. I think that realistically speaking for someone to do what Tony did, it would require a huge amount of strength and someone should have mentioned just how good of a job Tony did. As for Rota, I just hate that it was never mentioned in the show, so I like when it's mentioned in fics. Anyway, all of that to say that I enjoyed this story a lot and you did a great job with it. Thanks for writing it!

I wish it wsnt 4am (woah how'd it get to be that...early? late?) cause then I could leave you a review that would actually be coherent. I'm just gonna stick with saying you have awesomeness when it comes to writing fanfic. Now you must write more fanfic, to keep the fanfic monster that lives under my bed happy. (Do pardon my strange sense of humour won't you?)

Wow, very touching and good interactions between the characters. Love the ending with Abby and Tony.

Awesome story! What Abby said is so true. If anyone else had happened upon that scene as Maddie and Gibbs had hit the water, they wouldn't have been able to do what Tony did.

Great job. :o)

-Moki

*grin* While I like a lot of the tags to Requiem I've read, this one feels the most 'realistic.'

Good story. I love when people continue on these type of episodes, they always seem incomplete. Another reason to love fanfiction. )

A great story. Very good.