|Reviews for Follow You into the Dark|
| jasperFiend chapter 5 . 2/28/2011
HI SUCH A SWWWEEET STORY, thanks so much for writing it and finsihing it, on chpter 5 so I have a ways tgo go,, but very sweet
| 1853kaz chapter 18 . 1/19/2011
Enjoyable story! Some funny repartee between Bella and her siblings. Thank you for sharing :)
| jdiers17 chapter 18 . 11/17/2010
Loved it. Very funny.
| my1edward chapter 12 . 7/29/2010
Ha! Bella's snark is great-"Oh sorry, excuse me, just here to judge." But what Edward did was even better-"He leaned down and gave me a very passionate and very public kiss. As he brought me back up to a standing position he, snaked his arm around my waist. "This is Bella, my sister." LOL!
| my1edward chapter 11 . 7/29/2010
"Spastic Spice" - Lol! I'm really surprised Edward didn't even know how Bella came to live with the Cullens. He's really been out of touch, huh?
| my1edward chapter 10 . 7/29/2010
Aww, Emmett was such a supportive, sweet big brother here. I thought this line was really quite poignant-"I still have a feeling that one day I'm going to walk downstairs into an empty house. Em, I'm growing older in a world of make believe; usually my character doesn't have a happily ever after." Yeah, it's pretty mushy, but I'm all about that.
| my1edward chapter 9 . 7/29/2010
I loved their dance and Edward singing. And he kissed her! But why is she crying?
| my1edward chapter 8 . 7/29/2010
I really enjoyed the Alice-and-Emmett-Players' version of the Edward/Tanya conversation, and Bella munching on popcorn, mesmerized by it. Very clever.
| my1edward chapter 7 . 7/29/2010
Edward feels fireworks-squee!
| my1edward chapter 6 . 7/29/2010
Nice line-"Do you have Tourettes, or were you like sailor in a past life?" I love how Alice set them up for Bella to encounter Edward in a particularly appealing manner. I also like how Bella is so totally taken with him she can barely keep from acting inappropriately. Grrr, Tanya. I wonder who Felix was tracking? Possibly Bella?
| my1edward chapter 5 . 7/29/2010
Grrr, Tanya. I can't wait to find out what Edward thinks of Tanya, and for Edward and Bella to meet. Bring it on!
| my1edward chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
I love how snarky Rose and Alice are, but at the same time they love and support Bella so much. Love these Rose lines-
"Bella, did you pack anything that doesn't scream 'I'm from Alabama and it's my second day at Walt Disney World?'", and "I swear he could entertain himself for hours with a paperclip and a strand of yarn." I also liked, "Free the leash kid!" It might not be as important as Darfur, but it's my platform to back."
Who is it at the end? Edward? Why didn't Alice see him coming?
| my1edward chapter 3 . 7/28/2010
Oh, so there's Edward! I'm really excited for them to meet. Really, really excited. I'm so curious why he's been away-is he not a vegetarian? Did Alice see that he needed to stay away from Bella? Unfortunately must go to bed, looking forward to reading more tomorrow. (Glad to see Tofu-my daughter adopted a miniature longhaired Dachshund a few weeks ago-they're adorable dogs).
| my1edward chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
This is an evocative little thought-I love the image it conjures up of the craziness of Bella's life, that reading fiction is her reality check-"For some, reading is way to escape reality and venture into a fantasy land. I, on the other hand, live in a fantasy land and sometimes need a reality check from Dickinson, Bronte, or Austen."
Great lines-"You paint yourself blue one time and they never let you live it down." and, "I want to sit at home, eat Chinese food until I get sick, and see how many times Emmett can tell Rosalie 'I am McLovin' before she slaps him."
So where is Edward?
| my1edward chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Oh, this is really very poignant. When Renee was leaving Bella at the hospital, I wanted to cry. I love the novel premise that the Cullens adopted Bella.