Reviews for Wrong
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
Well you had evrything right with your story. Loved the conflicted feelings and how raw his attraction to her. Thumbs up.
Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Potterholic85 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
That was very well written! Nicely done!
Needle In A Haystack chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
really well written
thlove chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Ah, to know what is really important! Great story!
kingslayers chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
That's really cute, even if the forbidden fruit moral ish thing isn't generally regarded as cute
january giselle chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
totally, completely in LOVE with this story. You're a really great author, by the way. :)
dracosnumber1girl chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Super cliched last line, but I absolutely adore cliches, so I don't mind! Good job!
Piggwidgeon chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Well, that definitely seemed to be a successful exercise.

Good job!

15stars chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
this is so great! i especially love the last line! the characterization was really great- i loved being inside of scorpius's head and seeing what people thought about rose.

great job!
msfriday22 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This was great! Scorpius was so matter of fact. The pace was really nice.
Moonprincess92 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I absolutely loved that. You wrote exactly how i imagine their relationship, and it was brilliant. Shot. D
Darren's Wings chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
That MUST go on my favourites list. MUSTMUSTMUST.

It has a wonderful level of vocabulary, beautiful details. I think you can get away with Mary-Sues, too :) I only know a few people who can do that.

It's perfect. Really. One of three RoseScorpius oneshots that I've been able to really feel.

Awesomeness Fwee!

Ele Goddess of Elements chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
*squeals* omg that was so cute! i loved it!
iluvtheoc3000 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
I think his confidence at the end of the story was sexy... and i love that he watched her all the time.. not in a scary stalker way... but in a schoolboy with a crush way... aw this was sweet and i really like it!
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