|Reviews for 23 Challenges: Mario|
| Denneylaw chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
about my previuos review, now that i read it, if it sounded like i was coming off as rude to you, than i apologize for that, it's just, with the sudden change and all, you know, but i'm glad to hear you didn't bring that up. well, take care, good typing and all that. bye. ;).
| Pikfan chapter 23 . 5/31/2008
Mario really had it rough with these guys.
| Denneylaw chapter 23 . 5/30/2008
Nice, except you NEVER explained why you, all of a sudden knocked it down from 24 to 23. EXPLAIN PLEASE! Thanx.
| The GamerSwordsman chapter 10 . 5/28/2008
(points finger dramatically) So this is where you've been (course I knew that you would be here, but I wasn't fully sure if I was right or not). Anyway this seems like a very interesting story so keep up my friend.
| Pikfan chapter 4 . 5/25/2008
No one really knows what's beyond the shy guy's maks
| Pikfan chapter 3 . 5/24/2008
This will be harder than he thinks.
| Lugi2000 chapter 3 . 5/24/2008
I don't really get where this is going... but still is good. Could actually turn it into something should you want it to