Reviews for A Small Piece
xmiemiex chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Evynn chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I love jelsi so much that so perfect!
Ris Fallon chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Miya :DD!

Yes, I felt the need to announce myself. Rar. x3

Anyways, to business!

It was pretty good

I thought it was adorable

And the lyrics separated the time line nicely

But there are a few times where

You kinda either used the wrong word

Or your spelling was a bit mixed up.

I know at one point you wrote "blond" instead of "blood"

Maybe you should try find a grammar checker online?

Or send it to me before posting it :P

It just needs a small fine-tuning

No drastic anything, the story was beautiful
AllForLoveAndHappiness chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
aw this is so cute! i love it u should like do a sequal of them like when they get married and have kids! ilove it !