|Reviews for Burning Black Ep 1, Act 1: Dimmsdale By Blacklight|
| DragonStar7Queen chapter 20 . 6/10
| Bookworm Gal chapter 20 . 10/2/2014
This story is actually pretty entertaining. I must now go forth and read more. Please keep up the great series.
| The Chosen One chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
It's 'fury' not 'a fury'. Just thought you should know that you made that grammar mistake atleast two or four times. You know, I read this story and, I think, some of its sequels, a long time ago. For the longest time, I tried to find it again but, for the life of me, I could not remember the title or name of the author! I remember it (this story) being exceptionally good, minas a few spelling and grammar mistakes and errors. Jolly good, 'ol chap, jolly good! ;) :)
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 20 . 5/12/2013
...And Timmy is officially Not Human anymore.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 18 . 5/12/2013
Does Valerie not exist in this AU, or did Danny have an even worse falling out with her than in canon after Flirting with Disaster?
*claps* Brilliant use of language. ...This is going to be very, very close.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
Yep, he did. And Timmy? That outfit does make you look like a punk.
Hmm... So, is she telling the truth, or is Timmy about to walk head-first into a trap?
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 13 . 5/12/2013
I see she's as cheerfully delusional as ever. I'm with Romi on this one. Poor dear.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 12 . 5/12/2013
Oookay. What was with the nausea attack? (Poor guy.)
"'It's another step. We'll need to monitor him more closely from here on.'" Emphasis on "we." Hello, foreshadowing.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Hypothesis: Trixie is a Stepford Smiler, pretending to be happy in the hopes she'll fool herself into believing it, or at least fool Remy into thinking she doesn't loathe him.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 10 . 5/12/2013
*sigh* I knew it. Wrong end of a beat-down.
Wait, what did Romi call Remy?
Huh. Does Timmy have a foreshadowing sense now, or a limited sort of precognition?
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 8 . 5/12/2013
Oh, so close. Where'd the vision/hallucination come from? Tootie panicking and seeing things, or some other power sticking its nose into Dimmsdale?
...Juandissimo is the mastermind? Or at least the strategist.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 7 . 5/12/2013
...Danny robot copies? Androids? Caleb? (I know it's a bit late, and that the first one is a crossover element, but I don't remember the latter two from my, admittedly rather perfunctory, ToS research. Were they from other games in the continuity?)
...Cr*p. "No plan of operations extends with certainty beyond the first encounter with the enemy's main strength." - Helmuth von Moltke the Elder. Said quote is often paraphrased as "No plan survives contact with the enemy." The enemies are (at minimum) Remy and Crocker, in a much grimmer Dimmsdale. This is going to be very, very bad.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
...What happened to Anti-Cosmo and Anti-Wanda when Cosmo and Wanda got cut off?
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 4 . 5/12/2013
Um. Wasn't it only Wanda who had a Timmy Sense in canon? Did Cosmo's come from their being bound to Timmy?
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
Oberon High School. Subtle. (Well, no worse than Casper High, I guess.)
...Okay, Victoria is way too nice. And there are a few little things like misplaced commas. Oh, well.