Reviews for The Gauntlet of the Magi
XanderHunter chapter 10 . 4/13/2013
Hmm, I must not have been paying as much attention as I thought I was reading this as the only reference to their nightly activities I can remember is the one time Mrs Weasley walked in on them and called Tonks a Scarlet Woman and all that was was Harry sans shirt and Tonks sans pants, and I think maybe one other mention of Tonks having seen Harry nude, but I cant remember that specifically. I am personally happy without the outright lemon scene, but I can understand people thinking they haven't been having sex. The only real character I can remember being talked about in any matter other then kissing is Ginny and we are seeing the side effects of that now *wink*.
Lady Evangeline Potter chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
What's the deal with Malfoy in this ? In the books and movies he's a git and yet here he's a good guy WTF?
Stephen Brown chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Phenomenal, phenomenal series, good sir. Whereas I didn't quite enjoy this series at certain times, I enjoyed it overall as a whole. Looking forward to your F-Series, whenever that comes out. Continue with the writing.
Stephen Brown chapter 10 . 12/19/2012
I must say—your rant made me laugh. Ah, yes. There are plenty of erotic couplings with the fictional Harry Potter characters. Sex doesn't make a book interesting if it's the sole focus. I love Stephen King novels, and he rarely writes sex in his books, if at all. Sandra Brown, on the other hand, has sex in all of her books. Incidentally, her stories would be fantastic, even without all the literary porn. Your point is incredibly valid. The lack of sex does not deter from this story's attractiveness. I thank you for writing this story. You did lose my interest somewhere in Book 6, but you roused it later in the aforementioned book. Looking forward to this story's climactic conclusion.
Magic Shade chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
Saying this before I forget it.
Every single time in this series you've described Harry as "Stabbing" something with his fork during a meal, it's been broccoli. I can't remember a single instance of you describing him as stabbing something else. Just found it odd.

Fantastic series though. Absolutely loving it. Realistic characters, good plot development, a good plot, intriguing ideas, very very nice.
HavenJunde chapter 2 . 7/30/2012
Nice job sneaking in the modified Tenth Doctor quote. I'm surprised no one else commented about it...
ElementalMaster16 chapter 23 . 1/15/2012
and so a great series ends! not much words to the describe the greatness of the story, very angsty, great, action packed...

do hope you keep the writing spirit going!
Klldarkness chapter 23 . 12/28/2011
Damn you. I've spent the last 4 days reading books one through seven of The r1 Series. Bravo man, Bravo. I say damn you, because I know I'll need to wait forever for the rest of the story. If it ever gets finished. You did amazing, writing a truly believable honks story. All I can say is thank you. And yes, I might have cried, and cursed your name at the thought of harry dying...
dudeguypersondude chapter 4 . 11/7/2011
Best line ever. "You DID do it!"

XD
MerlinsSaggyLeft chapter 4 . 8/8/2011
I will admit, I am typically horrible at posting reviews, but here we go.

I've read your entire R series over the last few days...haven't slept much and up until this chapter I've been thrilled with it.

I admire anyone who has the ability, gumption and patience to do a full "reboot" and yours has been very well done...mostly.

My complaint is how very much like Voldemort Harry has become after the merge and the fusion of the gauntlet. He is cold, callous, cruel and his threats are going far beyond angst and frustration; at this point the wizarding world *should* fear him more than they fear Voldemort.

I do applaud your attempts to write Harry a little differently as he undergoes different changes, and its rare to find a "good" Draco fic that doesn't involve slash (yuck). I also feel like Nymmy has become a background character and she's becoming a bit fan-girl-ish to the tune of "Oh I'll always love you no matter what you turn into" kind of thing.

Oh well, those are my 2 cents...overall, fan-frickin-tastic...however, I'm currently disappointed in Harry and I think I'll only give him another couple of chapters to get his ducks in a row, or unfortunately I think I won't finish the 7th book of your amazing series.
asfdafateqwtq chapter 23 . 7/2/2011
Your whole series so far is beautiful. You made me cry with the power of your literature (or some other sappy comment, whatever). By far, this series is my favorite within a huge list of favorites:1220 and growing. P
Weretiger Marduk chapter 10 . 5/18/2011
About the whole "wtf, everyone's a virgin" thing: maybe I'm just really clueless, but I'm seeing a distinct lack of hints that coupling is occuring. Which makes sense for your story, considering Harry's focus at any given moment. That said, this is a fucking epic read. been putting even my videogames on hold to finish this story.
The Fictional Saloon chapter 14 . 3/5/2011
Ah, seems Book 7 picks up his pace...finally. Was a bit of boring read so far.' Sry but I think Rowling messed up any traveling/road trip I will ever read in the future...
The Fictional Saloon chapter 4 . 3/5/2011
Ah, finally some background about this lousy breakup in the last book!
JM0RIARTY chapter 14 . 1/29/2011
your right, you know... first you kill Leon and now you make him one of the undead, thats cruel... how can you do that to your chara? dont you like him? :P

Mond
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