Reviews for Harry Potter and the promise of a lifetime
Nerfhearder69 chapter 19 . 4/18
BWAH-HAHAHA! I see Potter has been practicing his marital arts religiously. Hope he doesn't go blind!
pottersparky chapter 11 . 4/9
Hey I like this story. It just been 5 years after last update. Are you giving up on this story? I was hopeing you do all 7 years on it. I don't see this harry and hermione leting the toad woman use those blood pens on them. Looking forward to seeing how all this play out. Anyway I hope you fine time to read this review. Great story! It shame that this story might be abandon. I don't think anything I will say can change that. Please come to this story with a new chapther. One can only hope you do.
Redripper666 chapter 6 . 1/22
so far mostly a late down no real change kinda pointless sofar
Vegasman59 chapter 46 . 12/26/2014
Damn this is really good I hope you'll continue!
Vegasman59 chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
The Troll knock out was great, Aquamente and glacius one by Harry and one by Hermione at the same would help them build team work they will need that
Fast Frank chapter 46 . 12/10/2014
Too bad this wasn't finished. Despite a few weird words (eg. furniture as a verb for furnish) it is one of the better Harry Potter stories.
Fast Frank chapter 35 . 12/10/2014
The two paragraphs concerning Harry's attitude flatly contradict each other. A case could be made for boredom, hunger, and weariness overcoming Harry's initial optimism, but as written it just won't stand.
"...ear deafening." there's another kind?
Fast Frank chapter 31 . 12/9/2014
So for "an extra fee", the shopkeeper "forgets" the Wizarding equivalent of The Sullivan Law. Why am I not surprised. (sarcastic tone)
Although not as expansive as The San Diego Zoo, most of The Bronx Zoo features open air exhibits.
Fun fact: The Statue of Liberty's support structure was designed by Gustave Eiffel.
Fast Frank chapter 30 . 12/9/2014
Well other than the fact that Hermione hasn't turned 15 yet, good chapter.
Fast Frank chapter 29 . 12/9/2014
Of course some of that investment info could be self fulfilling prophecies: "Evans is dumping Xxx Ltd? We'd better get out too, before it's too late."
I can understand The Ministry's reasoning. Those wards could keep out aurors with a legal warrant.
Fast Frank chapter 23 . 12/9/2014
Not believing that Hermione got that much work done so quickly.
Fast Frank chapter 22 . 12/9/2014
How did Draco get in Slytherin, anyway? No cunning shown here. I guess The Hat assumed the Hufflepuffs would have eaten him alive.
Fast Frank chapter 21 . 12/9/2014
It makes sense for Harry, Hermione, and Dobby to go after Wormtail at The Burrow. The only excuse for delay is to give a reason for the Dementor on the train scene.
David M. Potter chapter 19 . 12/10/2014
I really hope Giinny loses the scent soon.
David M. Potter chapter 18 . 12/10/2014
Great chapter!
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