Reviews for Take me away
Anon chapter 4 . 10/31/2013
Wow chapter 4 was interesting
Tjojen1 chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Im only at chapter 3 and the story is already amazing :)
lover in the shadow chapter 29 . 5/28/2013
You are an amazing writer. Even though there were a few grammar errors you made everything else perfectly! I love Anthony and Isabel
ldsandctr chapter 9 . 6/20/2012
This was a cute story and I love it.
Deglaze chapter 6 . 5/10/2012
Love it3
anonomous chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I'm a grammar nazi. So just a little bit better grammar here
fantasyfreaks chapter 27 . 9/10/2009
I just wanted to say that I've been enjoying your story.

As a non-English native speaker, you've been doing well but here are a few mitakes I would like to help you with:

it is hurt, not hurted, an irregular verb. You should take a look at the irregular verb chart at the back of your English dictionary, since this is not the first mistake of the sort.

there WAS blood, not there were blood.

as for plot, well done for a short story.
doomeddarkchild chapter 2 . 8/23/2009
I like your story, its very well writen. go you!
waterrockz chapter 29 . 7/2/2009
i love this story! keep up the great work, effort, and time you are putting into this amazing story! can't wait to read more of this amazing story. )

Klavisa1992 chapter 9 . 6/12/2009
love it
241marina241 chapter 29 . 3/28/2009
i love this story your a good writer.

i just have to say i don't like the ending that much, the convosation end didn't seen right. it felt like there should of been a bit more.
Blinking Silence chapter 2 . 3/6/2009
I love this story!
Rachael chapter 27 . 1/17/2009
This is awesome! It's just as good as other books I've read!Great job! ~Rachael
Rachael chapter 11 . 1/17/2009
Eek! This is so good! You are a great writer marabouu. You might even make it in the writing business.
Devil Nightmare chapter 29 . 11/24/2008
I think you should write a squeal! lol

I want more!

I thought you did a really good job!

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