|Reviews for First Kiss|
| Twi-chick34 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I like this, please continue.
| cosital chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Thank you for the story. It is very well writen and romantic as well. I enjoyed the nice way you tell the story, very well done.
| fanfreak4ever chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
um...wow that was really good!
| be1smoke chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
WOW Such an intricate beautiful story. I absolutely adore it.
| Tishy chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Powerful imagery. You successfully painted a picture of Edward's indecision and of his love for Bella. I was engrossed and wished that there was more written. I felt the sting of his bite and the pleasure of his kiss. Beautifully written. Thanks.
| Makenna Alice Cullen chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
OMG I was SOBBING throughout this whole thing! You are AMAZING, don't let anyone tell you differently. I can't wait to read more :)
| XxScarlettRosexX chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Speechless... I love it!
| Edwardis2bella chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
that was really really good... at first i was wondering when the kiss would happen but you fit it perfectly in the end! good job!
| Clara chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
WOAH i cannot see at all where this is gunna go, please continue!
| AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
u had so much description and wording... i loved it... it was one of the best stories i have read on here...
| NemmerlesRaven chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I love the theme! Of all the concepts in Twilight, the one that appeals to me the most is Bella's complete and unconditional willingness to sacrifice everything for her love.
| incupsofcoffee chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I really liked this story. You really seem to know who Bella and Edward are. So much so that (in my opinion) absolutely nothing was out of character. The only problem I saw was that there were a few words which were used improperly. For instance, you once used passed where you should have used past. Nothing huge, but I thought I should let you know. Other than that, I fervently enjoyed the story. Nice work.
| way 2 HP obsesed chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
good..little gory..but still interesting
| poetess chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
that was really good.
keep up the good work!
| Lovisa Devereux chapter 1 . 5/12/2009