Reviews for First Kiss
jasmine chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
AMAZING, ABSOLUTLY AMAZING, omg you have to write a second part to this, love it so much!
Kaley -Orladofl chapter 1 . 4/11/2009

i think that might have been better than stephenie meyer's version!
Kaley -Orladofl chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
i liked the whole seal of love thing. LoL!
missdaine chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
brilliant story. I liked the romantic take on the changing of Bella and Edward actually deciding to do it. It was a nice change from the drama and chaos.
Twilightlovergirl chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Aw I loved it is was so romantic and loving
Mylove4uisTrue chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I love this short story! You did an excellent job, I actually had a few tears. :)
AmeliaScottLover chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
That was amazing...


I can't find enough words as to how amazing that was.

You're talented. That's for sure.

Amelia Cullen
iluvtwilight13 chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
i can't wait to read more of your stories i liked this one
Viper003 chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
Wow! That was really good (not to mention very well written)!
unknown chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Woah...That was just... Woah.
Jamieson Zed chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Alrighty - so I'm absolutely serious when I say that just as I got to the part where he finally bit her, Pattinson's "Let Me Sign" started on my music player...the symbolic imagery to the new movie as I was reading this was just too weird...and quite creepy! No joke.

Okay, now on to the story. Absolutely loved it - I think I've mentioned in reviews before that I really like your writing style, but I found this story to be particularly emotive, very powerful...and subtly so, not easily accomplished. Great job - again, loved it!
Kestrel chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
W-O-W... just wow... that was beautiful! it was deep and special at the same time... thank you for letting me read that.. it made my day!
atiecay chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Why oh why couldn't Stephenie Meyer have used something like this! Don't get me wrong, I love all of her work, but this... I didn't figure anyone could make the vampire transformation seem so romantic and.. loving. This was fantastic.
April-Cullen chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
That was really good! sounds like it might hurt to get bit in the tongue like that...XD
slimjimjerky chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
that was AMAZING!

exactly how BD should have been and exactly how I imagined it would be!
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