Reviews for Naruto of the Ten Swords
Jose19 chapter 4 . 4/2
I wonder how powerful is Naruto because he seems to be a bit overpowered for the first part of the story because he should not be equal to Kakashi because he has been trained by Minato, and fought in a actual war, and he should not be up to par with the Sannins because to me he is a rookie gennin with great skills, and that would make him too powerful for this story.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 4/2
I get the sense that I hope that someone attacks him in a way to prove his point because he is not going to be a pushover anymore but he is strong but he is nowhere as powerful as the Elite ninja that exists out there because he will need to brought back to Shinobi standards because he needs to learn the Rasengan, and control Kurama because having skill with a Sword won't give him anything against the likes of Madara who could easily beat any Samurai of any caliber including Mifune who is the best Samurai in the Elemental Nations.
Unknown2112015 chapter 18 . 8/23/2014
Well, I liked both versions of this story. But you are the writer and I am the reader. Now I am waiting for the next chapter of Heir of the Juppongatana so I read this one to buy time. I am hungry for more of this one as well the other one.
Shattering chapter 5 . 3/19/2014
Hah, kinda lame, I mean would you listen how some 13 year old would tell you something to do? I would show him middle finger. I know that you made a re-write of the story, but if it's the same story where Naruto takes front all the time and all the seniors listen to him, then it's not just cliche, but a complete bull$hit.

Please no offence, but that type of a story that I described yours to be at the end of a first chapter is just too overused and it becomes too plain, no matter what kind of abilities protagonist has and what anime is used for a crossover. It's like eating raw oat.
Shattering chapter 2 . 3/18/2014
Man I SO 'Called it' D. This is the typical story where Sasuke 'demands' everything and council is licking his ass the entire time. Kinda contradicting, don't you think? They should be more wary if him because of his clan.
Kinda cliche don't you think?
Shattering chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
I can already see. It will be a bashing story and main antagonists will be a popular choice number:

1.) Made up 'civilian council' (it always cracks me up what people do to just make some sort of antagonist whom to blame for Naruto's misfortunes)

2.) Sasuke Uchiha

3.) And Sakura Haruno
kyle chapter 10 . 3/15/2014
dude nice chapter i liked the last part where naruto actually releases all the genjutsu on his body and the shinsengumi tatoo im hopin the next chapter will explain it i even looked up shinsengumi t find out if it was reall or not and suprisingly it is anyway thanks for the chapter hope u make this into a story with like 40 chapters tata for now
King of Madness chapter 10 . 1/3/2014
1. Yes, I liked it.
2. The obnoxiously quick summary of Naruto's life.
3. The review requirements...
Schenk24 chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
I was eating a cookie quite joyfully does this mean that there is something wrong with me
Josh chapter 18 . 12/12/2013
You made your invasion chapters to long
kingrobert84 chapter 12 . 12/10/2013
it was awsome
qwettot chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
why you makes naruto show of while he can just sit and wait
qwettot chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
why must you make naruto join leaf village while he can be mercenary or wonderer...
and why naruto so open up...
if you makes naruto a little bit or much mistery this story will be awesome..
Slytherin Studios chapter 18 . 10/22/2013
I love this story and I hope one day you'll come back to this so please don't delete this story.
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Update immediately, please!Update immediately, please!
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