Reviews for Protect Her |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Had to review again to get 500 REVIEWS for an awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! I really like it so far. |
![]() ![]() Great |
![]() ![]() Stop ducking asking for reviews you dumb whore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story! Out of all the Quil and Claire fanfics this is my all time favorite story. Please update soon I can't wait for the next chappie oh and by the way you are an amazing writer! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Iv read a couple chapters and like it was said before in one comment , its doesn't transition well and its to fast and choppy , it doesn't make you really feel for the charcaters but the overall idea is good just not wriiten well ,but keep working |
![]() ![]() The only reason I'm reviewing is because I refuse to read any more of this story. I may be missing out on probably the world's greatest story but I'm sorry- I actually refuse to read anymore. As soon as I read a story I review. No matter what. But as soon as I saw your little authors notes not beggin, but actually threatening to delete your own story because you had no reviews I lose respect for the author. Fanfiction is a place where writers can express their stories in the open, not to get comments on it that may or may not say two words or the word 'update' So Im sorry- I mean no bad intentions but I cannot and will not be finishing reading this story. Sorry. |
![]() ![]() Dude. This story is moving wayyyyy too fast. No transitions, no feelings, just BAM! today i imprinted on Claire. Now she's 9. Now I killed her father. Now she's happy and coming back with me. It's wayy too choppy and it doesn't feel like a story at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Quil and Lina! On a happier note Claire is adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was an interesting way to start the story! I saw a trailer for your story on youtube and decided to check it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great. and so sad how could her dad do that to her. loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() did you time that ending AN to elicit groans of frustration from your readers? Never mind don't answer that cause I'll think you did anyway...you evil cliff-hanger-loving author :-P |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww..poor poor quil :( he needs a little more happiness... |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story so far! looking foward to the rest. |