Reviews for EPONINE:The Last Black Heir THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS
ImBritishNotPosh chapter 10 . 10/19/2011
Why did Eponine get sorted i know she is snape's servent but sirius told dumbledore to look after her so shouldn't he at least let her get sorted.
Allen Pitt chapter 10 . 6/22/2008
more clues -so they kept Eponine alive probably to gain control of the Black estate... meanwhile the 'friendships that will last forever' will be sorely tried in 3rd year when they find out she's Sirius's daughter, I bet-
Maddiegirl chapter 9 . 6/11/2008
Again with the laziness.

Good chapter
Maddiegirl chapter 8 . 6/11/2008
1, i can't be bothered to log in.

2, sorry for not reviewing before.

3, this was a good chapter
Allen Pitt chapter 9 . 6/10/2008
neat...and maybe while Dumbledore is explaining things to Harry we'll hear a brief mention of why Ep. is treated as she is...? Though likely it has to do with who got guardianship...
Allen Pitt chapter 8 . 6/9/2008
Might be interesting if Tom Riddle knew Jane also...and could give a hint or two. Maybe Ep. will remember the mentions of the name and ask Hermione to research it. There's got to be something like a yearbook for each class...
Allen Pitt chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
Kind of interesting that nobody (Dumbledore, McG etc) thought Ep's guardian, Snape, would keep her out of the poorhouse... things could get real awkward in 3rd year on once SB is back...
maddiegirl chapter 7 . 6/5/2008
Cool chapter.

UPDATE SOON. pLSE. Aragog scares me.
maddiegirl chapter 6 . 6/3/2008
2 in 1 review.

Both chapters were really good. Keep it up! Yay.
Allen Pitt chapter 6 . 6/2/2008
like kissing a cousin,yep... Not sure which of the 2 of them would be more revolted to get the news that they are cousins. Hey, any chance Ep. is a metamorphmagus? Probably not, it would have shown up before now...

Maybe some info about Jane can be gotten from that nice Tom Riddle fellow.
Allen Pitt chapter 5 . 6/1/2008
huh...interesting background. I was thinking, also, that although she's not a student, sitting in on classes & such, she's probably picked up more magical knowledge than people realize...

* Dumbledore has GOT to be kidding... doing the 'have you anything you want to tell me?' routine with her. She's got zero reason to trust any adult. I'm surprised she's able to form friendships (ie, trust anybody enough to risk it)-
maddiegirl chapter 4 . 5/30/2008
I hate luicus (or however you spell it) and snape and malfoy.

They're capital letters have been taken away from them! For ever!
Allen Pitt chapter 4 . 5/29/2008
I like your splicing her power into the events in the quidditch match, nice continuity... hm... I assumed snape was just tormenting her casually, now it sounds like it's part of a plan. Maybe they think they can break her enough to be able to control her once she's of age & inherits?

Hopefully the fact that she's a parselmouth will come out soon (along with HP) & cause lots of suspicion to fall on her, too... HP can ride out waves of unpopularity, Ep. has nothing to fall back on if that were to happen to her...

Sirius should be a little upset next year. Might be an undercurrent of him blaming lots of members of the Order for never doing anything, could get a bit awkward later on at Grimmauld Place..
Allen Pitt chapter 3 . 5/29/2008
ok, good explanation for her not being trained/schooled: no money. At a guess, 'usually' a magical guardian is assigned, and that guardian pays for such. In her case, Snape decided not to (big surprise!)... he's probably waiting for Sirius to die; once he does, then maybe Ep. inherits, and control of the Black fortune goes to her guardian...

* Clearly Malfoy has no idea that he's related to her. Kind of funny. It would be interesting if "Jane" turned out to have a few relatives out there somewhere...

It's occurred to me that poor Ep. looks at Filch and sees herself in a few years, ie spending her whole life at Hogwarts doing the scut work...eventually turning bitter and mean. Filch probably started out as an ok guy but squibs don't get treated very well by wizards...
maddiegirl chapter 2 . 5/28/2008
Yay they're back! lol
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