Reviews for Incounter with the red eyed vampires
PharaohsMagician chapter 3 . 6/24/2015
This was wonderful. I understand why Edward would walk away, as he tried to in Twilight with saying her being with wasn't safe and that she should go with her mom to Jacksonville. And I feel so sorry for Jazz since he had to endure the pain of the change once more, even if it wasn't that long. I do hope you'll update this story when you get internet back. It's an enjoys so read. Cheers and ta!:)
Cumberbatch-has-a-Sexy-voice chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
Thank you.:)
Arilien chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Interesting take on this. It was an enjoyable read :)
Oxygen.and.Cucumber chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Hm, I'm sorry but I don't think this was well written. "Excuse me if I mess up?"

Killing Bella can hardly be called messing up! And after he saved her he wouldn't just walk away... Re-write it... That's what I would do.