|Reviews for Hard as Lightning, Soft as Candlelight|
| felei chapter 2 . 5/5/2012
| BloodLust117 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I will definetly read this story wen u re-write it ;) x
| BloodLust117 chapter 2 . 10/6/2010
Liked this story... shame you didnt finish it... i would of love to read it! x
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
I love this, and I like the name change.
| Trombe chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Alright let me give you the lowdown.
First the things I like. I like your title. Very eye catching and makes the reader interested to read.
But I think that was about the only thing I liked.
The things I think you need to work on are; One, this was SUPER short. Barely qualifies as a chapter. A good chapter should be around 1500 to about 30 words. Unless of course you're writing a drabble, which this is not. Two, When I read the summary I groaned on the inside thinking this was like another Zutara one (The premise has been done like 50 billion times) but it made it even stranger when you had a OC as the lead (Not a very good sign. An original character shouldn't outshine the main ones). Third, the name of the OC struck me as very odd and very strange. Christina? Not very water tribe-ish if you ask me.
Theres something here but you've got to polish and work a little bit harder on your story.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
I like this it's really cute.