Reviews for Spring Dance!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/2
Better if Kari admitted .
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2
Good ,nice idea ending the chapter with a suspense
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
Not bad but could use some twist ,like tk already knew that Davis asked her ( then go straight to tk ran away) . Ok.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
this is fantastic
guest chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
This is just awesome!
TheLadyBlackhawk chapter 8 . 7/29/2008
ok, loved the story, hate pink, hate Davis, but I also HATe Mily Cyrus, or however you spell it, but other thank thqat LOVED IT! It would be cool to do a sequel. Davis's revenge LOL
Mysterious Bluerose chapter 8 . 6/23/2008
AW... i loved it! so...cute!
ScarlettRose390 chapter 8 . 6/21/2008
I absolutly loved this story! I think Davis' reaction to Kari and TK should have been a bit longer, but I still love it!
Navaka114 chapter 8 . 6/11/2008
I LOVED IT VERY VERY MUCH! THIS IS THEE BEST DIGIMON STORIE I HAVE EVER READ! You are my favorite writer of all TIMES! Y ou just have to tell me the name of your other brillant storie! PS are ya a girl or a boy? email me with the two answers one your other probably even better story and if your a girl or boy. Email
Hathos chapter 6 . 6/3/2008
've noticed the misspelling of Patamon to 'Patomon'. Check that out sometime, will ya?
Daneasaur chapter 8 . 6/1/2008
This was a very enjoyable story. Being a fellow writer, I like the way you put everything together, however, it was a bit difficult to tell when you went from one scene to another. Perhaps using a few dash lines to signify scene change?

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Like that?

The only other thing is that you kept spelling Patamon's name wrong. It's short for "Patapata", which is the Japanese sound effect for flapping wings, if that helps you remember.

Of course, if it was just personal preference, I understand

Again, great work.

TK/Pata Kari/Gato forever!
Lord Pata chapter 8 . 5/31/2008
Aw thanks for put me in the fic, I feel honored, and I really liked this chapter, how Patamon stopped Veemon from keep insisting Gatomon to dance with him and how Gatomon kissed Patamon leaving him in a daze, pretty cute moments

I'm glad Matt managed to drag TK to the dance, boy I swear he is as stubborn as Tai XD

I laughed with Yolei congaing Davis out of the school, that was priceless XD

But I'm sure good ol' Davis will live, he sure will get a girl on his own

Great work can't wait to see the epilogue
Mysterious Bluerose chapter 6 . 5/30/2008
i forgot to say this...PLEASE FINNISH THE DANCE CHAPTER!
Mysterious Bluerose chapter 7 . 5/30/2008
i love your story! i'm a huge TK Kari fan! i think it's dumb they never ended up together in the actuall show...grr...i admit i'm not a sora tai fan but i love your story any way
Lord Pata chapter 7 . 5/29/2008
They have to kiss, they have to, all the planning can't go to the sewer

Pretty nice chapter, Mimi is a shopaholic lol
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