|Reviews for The Last Two|
| Resnalia chapter 4 . 1/5
What happened next?
| thedarkpirateking chapter 4 . 8/13/2016
I know this is late but if you are here please continue this fic
| Darkangel665 chapter 4 . 5/15/2016
Don't say that. Your not a terrible person. I hope you update soon. Thank you for the story and good luck, I wish you well.
| xPandaSenpai chapter 4 . 8/9/2015
All of us reading this are probably single and have nothing be eternal to do with our lives than read uhm... dirty fanfictions hahah XP it's probably True doe just admit it people XD hahah but other than that uhm... good job? With the fanfic and yeah that's all bye I'M OUTTIE ;3
| uyu chapter 4 . 7/31/2015
Did Luffy get her pregnant?
| Alpha J chapter 4 . 1/3/2015
So what next?Are they going to repopulate the whole world?If they are can you write a chapter for that?By the way I enjoyed this story.P.s. Can you do one with Luffy,Nami,Nojiko and Robin?Because I think that would be a interesting story.
| midnightscar17 chapter 4 . 10/29/2014
You should continue this theres still repopulation. Feel bad for nami but needs to b done
| Seria-Vermlion chapter 4 . 9/4/2014
Beginging: nononooo! Middle: wow... depressing. End: YAHOOOO! overall, love it!
| overcast fireside chapter 4 . 7/10/2014
I'm speechless...what an absolutely well-written, tragic story! I guess I'm late, since this was written a few years ago, but I just have to say that I really love how you portrayed Luffy and Nami's relationship. It's so pure and sweet and ugh, just simply beautiful.
I love how the only thing motivating them to stay alive is each other; I always thought Luffy and Nami's bond was special but your story especially establishes their closeness even more so. And I love how much Luffy wants to protect Nami and be strong for her even though he's also breaking on the inside from the loss of his comrades. Having him try to keep going on adventures just to cheer Nami up...urrrggghhh, my feels!
And the sex scene was done really well too. I can definitely feel the desire the two have supressed for a long while. The emotion, passion, and love that the two of them felt for each other was purely wonderful. I particularly liked the part when Luffy told Nami that she was the most beautiful even if an ordinary man would probably say other women are more favorable...Luffy is such a sweetie. :)) I'm probably biased (because I love this pairing to death) but I agree that Luffy would be immensely broken if Nami died, I mean, not in the same way he would feel about his other comrades' deaths.
Well, anyway, thank you for writing such a tragic, yet beautiful LuNa story. You make me ship them even more if that's even possible. :D
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 4 . 7/5/2014
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 3 . 7/5/2014
well its good they found an island if not they could drown yet on a island its worst because of dead bodies i sadly would have to gather as mmuch corpses and burn them thats the only way
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 2 . 7/5/2014
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
dang! everyones dead i go crazy for awhile then look for survivors yet if something like actually(similiar) happen like half of the population of earth was killed by a great earthquake or meteors falling from the sky or some grand killing spree and people just gone mad slaughtering whoever they see oh i find a hiding spot and find my myself a woman or two or three and recreate population hahahaha
| LuNa 4eva chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
What's with the last sentence? -.-
| LuNa 4eva chapter 2 . 3/23/2014
I think that not everyone on the the planet is dead yet,
for Luffy broke the weapon before it could reach every single person on 'earth',
weｌｌ that's just my opinion though..