Reviews for Betrayal
dohagrl chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
great sroty! i really liked it!
saki828 chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
What the? You tricked us? This was set up? Oh my you're good, but so wrong lol.
saki828 chapter 3 . 12/10/2010
Sometimes we just need to be fucked, like immediately, no bed no talking no handcuffs etc. I was wondering when she was going to voice that to him. Her pussy needs to take control lol.
saki828 chapter 2 . 12/10/2010
Hmmm he's a tease. Cock tease or is it cock block? He did actually block his own cock from getting some so he can be both right? Either way I hate both lol. I would've jumped his dick teasing me like that lol.
saki828 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
When I saw the title I was like "what? betrayed? what does this have to do with anything lol?" But then I read the first couple of sentences and aha...lol. I've been there. Frankly I thought that shit only happened to me. Damn body knows when it's my hand and denies it lol. Sigh.
gredelina1 chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
OMG! My hubbie won't be home for several hours and I happen to read this steaming story. Must take cold shower now!
sweet2you chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
Man o man that was some story. I'm hot just thinking about it.
JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Wow man.

Great way to start off a story lol.
CRAZYCARE4 chapter 4 . 10/31/2009
What a great story,I always love Dom Edward and your lemons are HOT HOT HOT. thank toy
StacyAnn159 chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
i didn't get that line about door to door salesman so what that was all planned like a scene?
greeneyedgirly chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
This was one hell of a lemon, that was so hot! Great job!
SGX78 chapter 4 . 6/15/2009
Love this story...hope to see more soon
readingisbliss chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
Hot. Very hot.
AurianaV chapter 4 . 6/5/2009
I really liked this short story. 4 chapters But brilliant GREAT JOB! I was entranced the whole time. You write very well.
Bammers chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
that bwas great hope you will update soon...
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