Reviews for Deliver Me
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 4/19
J'aime.
jon.rich.31 chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
There was going to be bi-weekly updates, so what happened? This is such a promising fanfic, and I'm aching for more!
Hi chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I love this story
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
umm this looks like a good set up but referring to the notes at the bottom if Gohan is 16 Goten would be 5-6
because Gohan turned 11 just before the Cell Games and Goten was born 9 month later... about 3 month before Gohan's 12th birthday.
Dragonsatan chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Is there going to be more chapters up?
chaos267 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Wow just wow this thing has an amazing beging i loved it. Its been around 4 years though so was it abbandoned cause that would suck.
RurouniSakura chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Definitely continue this one! It looks like it's going to be really good! I can't wait to read more!
Writer of Angelus chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
you havent updated this fic like you said you would so i was wondering if this fic was abandoned or not?
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Aren't you guys going to update this? This story has an amazing plot, and an update would most certainly be appreciated.
kwak73 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Wow I havent seen a DBZ story like this yet, but Im really looking forward to it please update.
Brizzy chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
wish you would continue
Shadowhunter536 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
interesting story idea. hope you continue it sometime
Flamelord99 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Please update!
This seems like a good story in the making!
XSupplice chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
unique idea, very interesting... keep going
MandereLee chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Just wondering... is this story ever going to get updated again?
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