|Reviews for Not So Broken Anymore|
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Aww! This story is very cute! The only thing I found jarring were a few typos and the page-break. (You might want to use the standard one.)
Otherwise, excellent job!
| Lake25 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
confess right now: you wanted to make me cry!
that was so sweet!
and i really nearly cried...ok...i'm highly unstable on the emotional side of things...so what!
anyway i loved it...will probably never happen but i liked it...i think both of them are too comfortable with and used to their masks to let them cramble but it was nice to read otherwise
| InARealPickle chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Beautiful. It's the relationship I wish Kakashi had with Naruto.
| TheOneInYourCloset chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I love this story . omg it made me cry!
| Maki chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Hey hon! LOVE this! It's so poignant and sweet and adorable, I love the contrast you have of how Naruto's normally so loud and jumping around but how he knows to just be still and quiet and comfort Kakashi! Such a sweet fic, there aren't enough!
| billys-green-soup chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
thank god you didn't stop with that fic. i love your naru-kaka stories! they're so cute! XD
| InsomniaticFrenchToast chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Okay I love it when Kakashi is acting like a parent towards Naruto! I originally looked up fics with Kakashi and naruto to see if I like that yaoi pairing so I could argue with my friend on wether KakaNaru or KakaIru is better if Kakashi must be in a yaoi pairing.(KakaIru all the way man...tho I'm having trouble finding a yaoi KakaNaru...) but... OMG PARENTAL!KAKASHI IS SO SWEET! I love, it makes my heart all warm and gooey...(wait doesn't a gooey heart mean a dead me since it can't pump blood) I love it when team 7 acts like a family...DAMN YOU SASUKE! WHYD YOU HAVE TO RUIN IT!
| WindSoul17 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I like it. It was really sweet. I especially liked how Naruto said nothing, he just held Kakashi; it seemed very appropriate and fitting.
| Yamamoto Kaiko chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
wow nice story you should really make it to a full story. it would be intersting to know whar would happen after naruto wakes up and sees that he is at his sensei's house. anyway love the story very much!
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
-smiles sadly- Great fic... the setup was wonderful, and you played the cahracters very well. Ninja a broken humans, and you captured that insubstantial idea and made it into something that can be seen: words. Good job- I'll look forward to see more of your writing... 'Specialy if its Naruto!Bonding fics ;)
| Kimihiro Yuui chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
It's a really sweet story. I think, although it is only my humble opinion, that you've got a pleasant, subtle style of writing, and yet your story filled me with feelings of sadness, hope and love. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
| Tony WildRiver chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
oh very nice. Cute, decently written, very "family." I enjoyed it.
| acuphalffull chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
I liked both the plot of the story and your style of writing...plus the story is kind of cute! v
| Kings-Shadow chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
this was great, really great for not watching to much of the anime, good job.