|Reviews for Deus ex Machina|
| Hairi Esh Mooncake chapter 1 . 1/8
I liked this variation of thoughts and musings and search of logic to all to this.
| Elena Masen chapter 21 . 12/23/2013
This was absolute perfection. The epilogue was just gorgeous, thank you so much for this story :)
| AlYeSe chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
good so far
| CastlePhoenix chapter 21 . 7/9/2013
I have no idea if you're still writing or even using this site anymore given it's been a few years since you posted this but I thought I'd let you know that I found this story brilliant. It was really, really brilliant. I almost want it to continue on...but really I think you ended it perfectly. I like to think Mickey's still out there somewhere in Pete's World because he deserves that. But then there never really was a choice for him hey. He wasn't going to let Rose die when he could send her back to the Doctor. Your prologue and your epilogue were unique and an interesting perspective on life. So, thank you for this story. Really.
| JustATemporaryEscape chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
This story is so great!
| JustATemporaryEscape chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
I loved this prologue! It's witty and claver, makes a great point too
| lalala777 chapter 21 . 3/4/2013
This was a wonderful story. There are very few stories I read on here that sound like they could be actual DW episodes, and this is definitely one of them.
Thanks for the great read!
| Nostalgic Beauty chapter 21 . 12/11/2012
Aww I'm glad that Rose made it back in the end. You had me worried. But, it would be nice if you wrote a sequel where the Doctor and Rose smooth out the wrinkles of their relationship. This time around, the Doctor has his best friend Donna to kick his butt into gear when he pushes Rose away.
You're so good at articulating emotions that I think the sequel would be quite the read. :)
| tkross chapter 13 . 8/24/2012
I read this story the other day and can't get this particular chapter out of my head. I love the whole thing and really really wish that the actual show could have gone this way (if not for the will of the actors themselves maybe it could have) but the part in this chapter where the Doctor describes what it is like to die and come back in another body and still remember and feel every thing that Rose is and was to him is just absolutely brilliant and beautiful. Your vision of Rose is how I see her and I really think you write her better than anyone else does. I love how you write everyone else in this fic as well and your writing style is wonderful. Please come back and write more!
| Shelbs13 chapter 21 . 2/20/2012
I loved every second of this fanfic! The Doctor was so in character and so was Jack and Mickey (the not idiot?) and Rose! I loved it!
| Chris4 chapter 21 . 11/26/2011
I am SO glad I found this story, even if it is years after you wrote it. Fantastic job, excellently written, and it kept me up past midnight to finish! Would have liked a kiss at the end, but I guess having the Doctor and Rose get back together is enough. Great work!
| seekerchasing chapter 21 . 9/24/2011
beautifully-worded story with a very exciting plot. loved reading this!
| 10Whovian chapter 21 . 9/19/2011
Nice story that. I like how you added the suspence then the hope then the surprise that wasn't really a surprise, but still amazingly awesome. I also like the short contimplative chapters at the beginning and end of the story makes your story different from others.
I didn't understand how the Doctor managed to excape from the lightning ball, explain?
Thanks for the awesome story, by the way. :)
| Hikari Urania chapter 21 . 6/16/2011
Bravo...that's really all i can say...bravo. I just fell in love with the story. Every single part of it. I loved the ending, the beginning, the middle just everything. And i especially loved the relationship between Rose and the Doctor. You managed to portray them so well. Because their relationship was never about the kissing or anything past that. It was just about the incredible love and trust that they could portray through one glance. Another thing i loved was how Jack was the only one "in" the relationship. He was the only one who truly understood how complex of a love the Doctor and Rose shared. Truly amazing. Bravo!
| Miz636 chapter 21 . 5/2/2011
This was really well done. An interesting idea of how to get Rose back. I mean, have a hole in the rift slowly opening and communications occur before Mickey sends Rose through the hole right at the end. It was a fun, sad, action-filled story that just drew me in as I read it.
You've got a well-written story, and I'm glad I gave it a go.