Reviews for Falling For You
Loner Kid chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
deidara is a bit ooc when he said" im sorry tobi i shouldn't ave kicked u un you are a good boy"
Redskiez chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
Deidara you crazy b stard.

Everything is just too scientific in this chapter, not sure if my mind could keep up. Since I didn't understand half the words and most of what's going on, I just accepted the fact that Tobi was in hospital.

Oh I missed Pakkun! I didn't realize how funny he was until you mentioned him, I didn't even have that pug in mind when I read "Who's this? He smells familiar." You made him so cute here! Pugs! :D
Redskiez chapter 10 . 10/17/2013
What an unexpected but pleasant surprise! Eh, I meant both the update and the lemon.

I thought they were having a holiday last chapter? Or has that holiday ended?

I expected you quickie to be something else... Perhaps I haven't really caught the grasp of every single word that can used to describe intercourse. The quickie is indeed very quick if you ask me. Haha.

Loved that cute moment with the "senpai" thing.
Certain things had been confusing for me, perhaps because it's a while since each updates and I completely forgot what you wrote in previous chapters!

Regarding the A.N.
"but as it turns out, you actually have to write a chapter to be able to post one. Who knew?" ...are u a wizard.
Redskiez chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
Yay! You updated! I was waiting forever.

Deidara you're acting like a woman, stop. Shtap.

No seriously Deidara, you're acting like the normal housewife who isn't getting enough attention in bed. Shtap.

I'm probably thinking ahead but surely it would be absolutely horrifying when Natsumi gets to the age where she starts to grow up and realizes her mother and father is the same gender, and she would also have problems with puberty and all hell would break loose. Yep.

Please update soon! D: I love this story
IchigoPudding chapter 6 . 5/28/2013
aww, 'tachi xxx
IchigoPudding chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
Awhh love it :3 xx
IchigoPudding chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
awwhh soo cute x
IchigoPudding chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
Awww, so cute xo
IchigoPudding chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
So cute, Obito 3
IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Awhhh cute xxo
Tobi 3 chapter 5 . 12/8/2012
XD I about had a fangirl seizure...my birthday is Aug 3rd.
Grace-Logan chapter 8 . 11/14/2012
this chapter was good it was sensible with humour added and I kinda feel sorry for tobi if you have dei punish him for comments and with holding missions for four years hee hee I so hope tobi doesn't get to much on his bad side or he might be finding a few bombs around him very soon.
Redskiez chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
I never liked Tobi being Obito.
Hmm... One thing I would have said before I read this chapter, was that all the connon characters were very in character, you wrote them very well.
With the romance(and family) it might be kind of hard to still in character Tobi and Deidara, but thats okay.
But heres the thing about out of character ness, (I'm usually okay with it) whatever they hated, it would be a bit better for them to hate it still. (Then again, all the OOC's I've ever read was merely Deidara and Tobi acting and saying things that would be impossible for the IC ones to say. E.g. "AH! Fangirls!" Deidara shouted when Tobi ran into their room. Yeah...)
I see that Tobi seem to talk to Kakashi normally, and you hinted that Konoha is where they might be staying. You see, I don't know if you read the manga or not, but, *SPOILER!*[Don't read if you don't want spoilers!] (Basically your Tobi is completely bipolar of the real one.) Obito was saved by Madara but he went out to save Kakashi and Rin, only to find Kakashi killing Rin. Stating that hell is where he is, he returned to Madara and started to continue his plan, telling Madara that he no longer cares about anything in his past and that he would like to create a world of peace, where Rin is in it, of course.(Hopefully Deidara too!) After Madara made Black Zetsu with his will, he died and left it the job to Obito.
Well, that's about it. Love your random updates, makes me happy randomly.
Please update randomly! So I can be happy randomly and get stares xD
Oh, who's Hana? I don't remember her... Your OC? (Loads of OCs in here, children and stuff)
Grace-Logan chapter 7 . 10/6/2012
Your story is so funny I literally cried it was that funny, especially when Hidan saw Tobi kill Itachi that kept me laughing for ages, and also with the time skip thing it would be best if you did it 6 years as there would more to write about if your planning on making the story about Natsumi or if your planning on doing some sort of generation continuation to the story as Natsumi has so much potential and could lead on into another story.

also does Natsumi have the mouth hand thingys that Deidara has cause that would be awesome if she could do both of Tobi's and Dei's jutsu's.
littlewolfwindspeaker chapter 6 . 7/29/2012
goddammit hidan!
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