|Reviews for Twins, Crushes, and Insecure Boyfriends|
| szym chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
aw that was cute!
| mateisha chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
interesting, waiting on the next chapter
| GilbertDrone328 chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
I love the Sebastian/Olivia pairing! I really liked this story!
| crazyhorse08 chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Aw that was so cute. I really liked how you developed everyone's characters and that you actually explored Olivia and real Sebastian's relationship and explained how they got together. I never really accepted how the movie just put Olivia and Sebastian together after one little kiss.
Anyway great job, I really loved the dialouge!
| Aea chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
There really aren't enough stories out there that deal with Olivia and (real) Sebastian. I really like that you had it still take some time for her to be serious about him and not Viola, since the movie sort of just threw them together at the end with almost no reason or explanation. I don't always like Olivia as a character in general (she seems so shady and manipulative to me!) but I do think her feelings here are very well done.
Sebastian's insecurity over Viola was a great touch. Talk about sibling rivalry! I like the one shots, but I hope that For Love of Soccer is coming up soon;-)