Reviews for Traitor Arc: Loyalty
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 7 . 3/27/2014
I just reread this (I'm favoriting stories now that I've finally gotten an account) and I must applaud you again!
Angelique Jane chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
Actually, it's canonically correct book-wise to have one drop on each separate injury. External injuries at least. The only time someone ingests it in the books is when she gives it to Eustace for his seasickness.

Sorry. I really like Narnia...

Spectacular story, as usual!
Angelique Jane chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Okay. I normally wait until the last posted chapter to post, but I'll make an exception.

You have got to be one of the cruelest and best writers I've found here! You keep killing (or near killing) people, but your writing is extremely good! I trust this will all turn out alright in the end...
TeamJacob1998 chapter 7 . 1/1/2014
I really liked this
MJLupin27 chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
Well, usually Peter is my favorite. In the books, I mean. In the movie, the Prince Caspian one, he acted like a jerck but that isn't in the books.. Anyway, In here you made him look horrible, so if that was the intention, you made it :)
Allie Danger chapter 7 . 11/3/2012
i love itt! :')
Allie Danger chapter 6 . 11/3/2012
oh no! i wanted edmund to bleed at least a cut? a poison? a hit? something...?
jajajajjaa
i love the comparison on the witch and edmund.. i like it :)
Desertfyre chapter 7 . 3/15/2011
Great story! Loved this second installment! D Glad that Bright-Spark survive!
Desertfyre chapter 4 . 3/15/2011
Whooo, even I'm tried of the long titles. lol I never heard them used so much.

I think your Peter isn't so bad. (I personally, love Peter and so I would write him as hot-headed sometimes but not complete jerk for the most part). I do think your Peter is fitting in with the flow of the story, I'm okay with it.

Loving this story!
Desertfyre chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
I know I'm just mentioning it now, but I LOVE Bright-spark! He's awesome! Hope the rescue party gets there soon.

Shall continue reading!
Taryn Streambattle chapter 7 . 5/12/2010
This was well done, a worthy sequel. One mistake- you called Peter "eater" once. Otherwise, good job!
L.A.H.H chapter 7 . 7/28/2009
You only have four storie in tis arc. Sob. i want more! Please write more! x
May Eve chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
Aww..I love Bright-Spark! -coos and squeals-
samus18 chapter 7 . 1/10/2009
This is even better than the last, if that's possible. XD

Actually I love both your stories equally.

And I have to say that Maxus is my all-time favorite. _

Thanks a million for a including him in your story.
DanceOfTheEnt-Wives chapter 7 . 7/25/2008
poor edmund, but love the story _
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