|Reviews for Dementia|
| ProfWhoLock chapter 5 . 3/12
I've been crying from about chapter 3 onwards. I think you are an absolutely genius writer and this is one of the most beautiful and by far the saddest fanfiction I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing this.
| LadySylvana chapter 5 . 2/4
Your story had me crying from beginning to end. My grandfather suffered from dementia and Alzheimer's before he passed away. It makes the story so much more realistic, with the way you described the symptoms and reactions of the family members.
| feeni chapter 5 . 1/8
GOd FUCK I CANT STOP CRYING I WAS CRYING BY THE FIRST C HAPTER AND IVE GONE THROUGH ALMOST HALF OF THIS TISSUE BOX HOW IS THIS EVEN LEGAL
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/17/2013
| spazzma chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
This was really beautiful... not to mention a well written work, but more than anything I loved the emotions and feels you so artfully created. And the best part of the story (at least for me) was the final line you used to end it all, it was perfect, and I can't even tell you how hard it hit me and just how empty it made me feel. All I can say right now is good job and thank you for this amazing fic...
| Ashes2Ashes121 chapter 5 . 12/7/2013
This story is incredible. It had me crying by the end of the first chapter, and I haven't stopped since. My grandfather died of Alzheimer's, and this story was very realistic about the symptoms and the emotions of his loved ones. It was beautiful.
| AniFan xoxo chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
Oh.. Oh my God, I'm crying, and my brother is laughing at me now but I don't care.
Your story is beautiful, and that ending "stop", I can't take the mental image of it. I could never, find another story like this, ever, *sob*sob* Now my tutor is laughing at me too *sob*
| Clydell Humphries chapter 5 . 11/25/2013
Oh my god.
I am going to sit here and babble like a baby for a while because that was probably the most beautiful thing I've ever read and it's torn my heart to piece because it's not as though this is some strange disease you've made up yourself, it's a real thing and people go through it and that makes it that much more emotional.
Great work, this is brilliant and I'm not sure what else to say.
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/19/2013
It is 2 AM and I'm crying like a little bitch.
That's all there is to say on the matter
Great job, OP, you ruthless sadist.
| PhoenixFlame53 chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
T-that was so heartbreaking... :'c :'c :'c
Wonderful fic, and well done. Thank you for this. :')
| ChloboShoka chapter 5 . 9/17/2013
This is such a lovely story and so wonderfully written. I really got the feels when I read this story and I think you did an amazing job with the kink meme prompt. I really miss that place, I had some good memories which this story reminded me off.
| FanFiker-FanFinal chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
I just wanted to say I've read it, not happily, I must say, because of the sad connotations, and because I can't bear sad narumitsu stories, they are too tearing for me. Anyway, I liked the way you did the flashback, telling us part of their life and how Miles is living it. Making Phoenix the one that suffers Dementia would have been equally unbereable, since Miles is the one that has to surpass hard events all his life, so...
I cracked at the final scene, because I really see Miles doing this, but it came shocking to me.
I like how Phoenix manage to suffer trying not to break himself and falling miserably. I think you did a good point of view from both and a good way of showing us the sickness.
Thank you so much.
Can I sue you for the tears that I drop? XD Now I need a psycologist...
| slyfoxlady chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
The ending got me! I ca't stop the tears. :( Stories like this hit so hard because they are so close to home. You did a wonderful job writing this! They say the best stories are the ones that really suck you in, and this is one of them.
| TheMysteriousGeek2345 chapter 5 . 8/18/2013
Why is this so sad? ;( Beautiful, ;( This is like the "Alone on the Water" of the Ace Attorney fanfic section (Alone on the Water is a Sherlock fic where Sherlock gets a brain tumour. Depressing, beautiful and damn it, so sad!)
| Izzymatic chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
read the first chapter and im crying already, im not sure i can make it through the other ones. My great grandmother is suffering from Alzheimer right now so this feels a lot more real than it really should. You right beautifully. thank you.