|Reviews for Without A Trace|
| charis-kalos chapter 5 . 6/11/2008
Yay! The boys saved Bobby. This makes me very happy. But I'd love to know what the cops do when they arrive and find one Michael Anthony tied up in the bedroom and another "Michael Anthony" dead in the kitchen.
| pandora jazz chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
What a great job with your fight scene, I loved the details.
I was so glad that they found Bobby, but I knew he would have to be OK.
It will be interesting to read Bobby's response to finding the brothers by his bed. I still love the fact that he called them for help.
So you have started the final four. I did enjoy "Ghostfacers". It was fun to watch and always love to hear big brother Dean yell "Sammy". I also loved how Dean figured out where Sam was being held.
Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
| alwaysateen chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Yeah! Bobby's okay! Thank you!
The brothers are so sweet around, very nice.
I can't wait to hear Bobby's reply if he heard a single word of their conversation, lol.
| Muffy Morrigan chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
YAY Bobby's found. Although I am still a little worried abouthim, and the boys, I don't know, it all seems a little easy for these guys...Great story, want more.
Five Impalas with some silver bullets, cause I think they'll need them...
| supergirl3684 chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
YAY! they found bobby! :D I'm officall thrilled! just for finding bobby i'm gonna go make double chocolate chip cookies just for you! :D
| Nana56 chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Great action! And they finally got the thing killed. Can't wait for the explanation of how it became what it was. Well done!
| jenilee chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Oh yay Bobby's safe and sound! You're off the hook...lol.
Well that was action packed.
I had to laugh at Dean's "Oh he didn't" when he heard Sam coming back in from outside. That was great.
Oh and love the bit of wiggling Sam was doing in the chair, and the "welcome to my world". Ha!
| ziggy.uk chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Great update Michaela!
Yay, they found Bobby, strung up and unconscious but still alive! Dean shouldn't have been surprised when Sam deposited Bobby outside the house and came back to help him as he would have done the same thing had the positions been reversed! And after all they were keeping the werewolf/shapeshifter busy so Bobby was safe!
Loved the scene with them trying to destroy the werewolf, full of action and battered Winchesters! Good that Sam actually remembered that hunt Dean was talking about and that Sam managed to get a clear shot to its heart!
Sam was right, trying to get too much mileage out of solving the mystery and saving Bobby's a*se would not go down well with the old hunter and he would have thought of some good payback! Guess Dean won't be able to resist a quick mention of it though! Just hope Bobby wakes up before those boys have to be surgically removed from those hospital chairs!
Awesome action packed chapter hon, loved it!
| Loves the Supernatural chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
*sighs with relef* Thank god Bobby's alright
| staceycj chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
| jenilee chapter 4 . 6/9/2008
Oh how sweet of you to put us out of our misery and post sooner!
Ah so the shifter and the wolf are one in the same! Did the shifter get bit by the wolf or did he just decide that'd be useful thing to be able to do? Geesh, I really never am right at the guessing..lol.
Thank god the foods ok cos a hungry Dean just isn't a good thing and I love Sam's response. I pictured the eyeroll right along with that.
Well I'm glad that they've figured out who it is so they can rescue Bobby. You realise if anything happens to Bobby we're all gonna revolt on you right? LOL just teasing!
| deanandhisimpala chapter 4 . 6/9/2008
Whew! I was busy for a few days, so I didn't get to read, so I read both chapters together, thank goodness! Then I didn't have to wait after that evil cliffie! lol! Great job again, I absolutely loved it. Can't wait for more!
| charis-kalos chapter 4 . 6/9/2008
Ooh, a shifter that is also a werewolf. Freaky! Okay, less of a cliffhanger than usual - but I want them to find Bobby soon, please!
| PADavis chapter 4 . 6/8/2008
Wonderful update, some hurt Dean, and a shapeshifting werewolf. Excellent. Thanks for the quick post.
| pandora jazz chapter 4 . 6/7/2008
Your awesome! Thanks for the quick update.
Yes! Sam moved fast enough to pull Dean to safety. Dean was hurt, but not to bad.
You had some more great lines in this chapter from the brothers.
“I’m sure it looks worse than it is.” said Dean, biting his lip as Sam started to pull aside the material.
“Yeah, and I’m sure you’re an idiot.” came the retort.
Than Dean's comment about the shirt, only to have Sam remind him it was his or Dean being true to his stomach, glad the food was OK.
Great job with the mystery. Like I said before, it is so nice to read a story where it's about the brothers and there is also a wonderful hunt involved.
When the brothers mentioned Henrickson and the bank, the first thought that popped into my head was the closing scene from "Nighshifter" and the Styx song "Renegade" playing.
I'm glad that they are closer to finding Bobby, the brothers are so tired, but they won't give up till they get him back.
I just had a nice thought and also a sad thought, first how much fun I would have had seeing this story as an episode, instead of some I watched this season. First season and most of second season, I know lines from different episodes that I have watched more than once. The sad thought, is this season I know when I want to fast forward an upcoming scene if I watch an episode again.
Thanks for the smile on a dreary day filled with rainshowers. I don't think summer is ever coming.
Also thanks again for the quick update.
Until next time, take care.