|Reviews for The Beginning|
| Maira the Panda chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
This is REALLY good.
| starbook chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
it has your tone to it lol...i like it!
| qtktkat chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
yes you warned me but still! i will find you tomorrow...
loved it dear
great- as usual
| Jessica-Bella chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
ohh that was realloy good! I really liked that!
Till next time. x
| aj chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
i wish you went into more detail about his life and his change but over all i liked it and i am antisipating the next chapter
| Nezz chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Aww. Poor Edward! And his mother! I really like your characterisation of her. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
| dsolo chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Nice premise, but the story feels a little rushed. You should expand on the first parts a bit to show more of Edward growing up.
| The Prettiest Wallflower chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
This was an amazing beginning :) expecially since it began off with once upon at time which made me not fall asleep in class, lol. im waiting for the next chpt.