Reviews for The Beginning
Maira the Panda chapter 1 . 1/25/2009

This is REALLY good.
starbook chapter 1 . 7/10/2008

it has your tone to it lol...i like it!

great job!
qtktkat chapter 1 . 5/27/2008

yes you warned me but still! i will find you tomorrow...

loved it dear

great- as usual

love always

Jessica-Bella chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
ohh that was realloy good! I really liked that!

Till next time. x
aj chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
i wish you went into more detail about his life and his change but over all i liked it and i am antisipating the next chapter
Nezz chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Aww. Poor Edward! And his mother! I really like your characterisation of her. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
dsolo chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Nice premise, but the story feels a little rushed. You should expand on the first parts a bit to show more of Edward growing up.
The Prettiest Wallflower chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
This was an amazing beginning :) expecially since it began off with once upon at time which made me not fall asleep in class, lol. im waiting for the next chpt.