Enjoyed this one. Thank you.

Smex
Sex
Lemons

Whatever

If I wanted that I would go to a porn site.

A great story has three things
Action
Adventure
And romance.

Romance doesn't have to be porny.

There is an old saying

If love someone, let them go
If they love you, they will return
If not they were never yours...

Jareth doesn't know how to let go.
His possessiveness, his forcing, his blackmail
Are the typical faults of someone in power.

I wonder if there are any stories where Jareth loses Sarah?

Like quite a few powerful people, Jareth is a fool.

Getting all his wishes and desires granted is bad for him.

There are very good reasons why so few prayers are answered!

If no one has told you yet,
Don't write explicit sex,
Suggest, hint, set up a scene,
Let your readers imagine the rest.

If I were Sarah I'd castrate him
Flay the skin off his member
Dunk him in acid
Sprinkle salt all over
Rinse him off with hot sauce
Give him a bath of boiling oil
Set him on fire
Then I'd get creative
Followed by cruel
And so cold his soul would freeze and shatter!

Jareth must be insane...

Not that madness matters
What is said is said
Done is done.

Who delivers the candy?
Jareth or Sarah?

One chocolate covered dreamer please!

The Labyrinth is going to give Toby a hobbit!? Awesome! Tolkien and token are two different things, you know.

If Jareth continues to insist that Toby is his son, couldn't Sarah make the argument that she would end up being at least his step-daughter? I'm pretty sure even the brother-stealing goblin loving fiend known as Jareth knows that his own daughter would be off-limits. Right?

Good Story. You just need to proof read it cause sometimes its so confusing who is talking.

I loved your story! Always frustrating to see how long it takes S to come around, but glad she finally did. :)

Hey great story. I have written a story about the labyrinth. Please tell me what you think. First few chapters are hard to read but i couldnt get it to g into a different format. The name of the sotry is The Labyrinths Choice. DOnt know if you have read it or not. HOpe you like it.

-coos in delight- Saoirse09 recc'd this to me - so pleased I read it!

Fantastic, absolutely brilliant!

L

-x-

The final conclusion to a fine Labyrinth story that I have ever read. I can't help but think though that there should have been more action and the like- but for a romance fic this was excellent! I was also a little disappointed that Josh didn't make an appearance in the epilogue- but I believe that is understandable. Anyway, fine job on this fic! I so enjoyed reading it!

Love it! Labyrinth is one of my favorite movies. You did an excelent addition to it.