Reviews for Fire & Crystals |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a nice and cool chapter this is. Keep smiling. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is getting good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha love it. XD jamie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this chapter that you have written today. So keep smiling, and be happy today. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fun chapter, and Jareth with Toby was clever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fun chapter, and I think Jareth is going to cause some mischief in the soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story post soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome! I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story.. please update soon. XD jamie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! That was a hot dream. Go Sarah! Jareth better make a move soon... And what's going to happen to our dearest baby brother? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta love Jareth as a villian, even if Sarah is being a stubborn brat! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Smex on the dance floor is classy! Haha. Anyways, I wouldn't have cared about Toby at that point. I would have just been "Yup, you queen. Let's go do it!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jareth is so clever! Impressive, very. I love Toby. You've written him very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Josh! I bet we'll see him later. No one would let Ms. Williams go that easily! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way you write Jareth's torment. It feels so real. |